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Review of chapter "Part 51 Conferences" from garrycooper
Review:
Good story.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 51 Conferences" from immortalsilence
Review:
loving it thanks more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 51 Conferences" from spk
Review:
Good job on keeping so many people "in" character. :)
Comments from author:
Thannk you its not to hard. Xander the hardest for me because sometimes I hate the character. But I am trying to be fair to him.
Review By [spk] • Date [1 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 51 Conferences" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting twists...
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 51 Conferences" from burmafrdnow
Review:
The problem I have with any Buffy/Giles is that when it mattered in Sunnydale Giles was by proxy her father. So anything else is ICK.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [16 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 51 Conferences" from immortalsilence
Review:
they'll sure get one with buffy and the team, thanks love it more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [16 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 50 no rest for the wicked" from banditdoz
Review:
Love it keep writing ;D Im glad their in the UK and I cant wait for the chaos to follow ;D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [1 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 50 no rest for the wicked" from immortalsilence
Review:
they are home wicked thanks more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 50 no rest for the wicked" from Eureka
Review:
9-10 cause of errors; otherwise great story.

@CaptainBoulanger: Fire DOES state that he doesn't have a Beta! Got a problem....DEAL with it!
Hell a person doesn't have a beta, it is a major problem figuring out what is wrong cause you know what you want to say and it doesn't always hit that you didn't get it out right! You were given advance warning that there was no beta and that there would be mistakes.

FireWolfe: Good chapter, yes there are major mistakes that DO require someone to proofread but everyone makes mistakes. Keep up the writing and do try to find a beta.
Comments from author:
I do run spell and grammar check a lot. It misses somethings. I dont claim to be a skilled writer I write for myself and yeah its fun to get positive reviews but really they are just gravy. I appreciate the support it means a lot. I do have beta's when possible but sadly this work is currently without one. Real life tends to disrupt things and as my schedules insane I can never promise work at any given time or reasonable interval. When I write time permititing I write a lot all at once generally on more than one work at a time and it tends to drive beta crazy. Most are just as busy as I am. So please bear with me on the work. If its to hard to read skip it. I am sure there are better writers out there. I read a lot of good ones here. Anyway glad you liked it and I'll try to catch the mistakes more often.
Fire
Review By [Eureka] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from (Current Donor)Sraya
Review:
Ok another story with a Buffy/Giles pairing so I cannot continue to read . To have Giles as a love interest is wrong on so many levels plus there is no way that Buffy would go there..yuk yuk yuk
Comments from author:
Well its not an obvious pairing and its not overly cuddley or pushy. I just think it would have evolved that way given time and no interference. I find it hard to believe people have no issues with Angel and Buffy when he was 200 plus years older but get freaked at Buffy and Giles. They are at least in the same centrury of each other. Personally the pairng makes more sense to me then Giles/Faith which the comics took a turn too. Anyway glad you liked it up until then but its not really an large part of the work other then the bond making them work together the couple thing just evolves it a step more. 20 years really not much of an age gap in real life but I guess it freaks some out.
Fire
Review By [(Current Donor)Sraya] • Date [13 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heavy News" from (Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger
Review:
I don't usually leave negative reviews, but then, I don't normally drop reading a story, either.

But this piece has awesome potential, a great plot plan, etc. However, there's so many spelling and grammar errors, capitalization issues, etc., that it really affects the readability. Also quite a few lines of dialogue where the speaker is not identified, or places where the point-of-view of a chapter radically changes mid-scene with no warning. After struggling to ignore it for several chapters because I thought the story really had potential, and some people settle down their writing style after 3-5 chapters.... I don't see any improvement and I can't stand it anymore. I know you are crediting a beta, and maybe they're checking the plot development or something else.... but it really reads worse than some unbeta'd fics I've seen in terms of format issues.

I found it rather surprising because this is the third of your stories I've read and the other two did not have nearly as many issues.
Review By [(Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger] • Date [29 Jun 13] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 49 Let’s Go Home" from ajw
Review:
I just found this fic and after reading through it I have to say that I absolutely love it.

Its nice to see a fic where SG-1 aren't always right, don't always get there way. Too often on both the show and in fanfics SG-1 is portrayed as infallible when they're all flawed in their own ways. Plus I like the fact that the SGC is basically getting read the riot act about arrogantly endangering the planet as they have been and they've only survived through a) the threat of Asgard retaliation on the Goa'uld if they attacked Earth and b) when someone does attack surviving through dues ex machina.

Looking forward to seeing what you do next.
Review By [ajw] • Date [28 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 49 Let’s Go Home" from slmncpm
Review:
bwahahahahaha BWAHAHAH!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 49 Let’s Go Home" from immortalsilence
Review:
Wicked, thanks love it more when you can pretty please, hope you are well
Comments from author:
Thank you for asking. I am well and trying to get back into writing rl been hectic. So its taking longer than I like sorry for that one.
Fire
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [8 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 49 Let’s Go Home" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
always brightens my day to read a new chapter from you. thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you I am happy it made you smile a little. It makes me feel good that such a small thing brings happiness to others. Then again I often feel the same when I read wonderful works here. It just astounds me that people like the insanity I work out.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [7 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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