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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Wheelie
Review:
Nice buildup, adding pieces to the puzzle. Need to see Cal or McDonald or ? get their butt kicked.
Review By [Wheelie] • Date [23 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Wheelie
Review:
Yes, this is getting good. A little bit of torture to get some answers is always fun.
Review By [Wheelie] • Date [23 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
What a place to leave us hanging!!

Hope that you still have this on a back burner, simmering.

James
Comments from author:
Oh I do, I do...My problem is that I moved halfway across the country in March, and I *KNOW* I have the notebook with chapter 7 in it somewhere in this apartment...it's just a question of finding it and typing it up :D
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Eureka
Review:
Dang! Nother kidnapping.
More please
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing but I did want to see Cal get his ass kicked.
Comments from author:
Yes, I know, but I needed him to be in one piece for the next chapter- don't worry, it's the last one, and there will be asskicking galore for all involved :D
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Eureka
Review:
Good story line. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Now to go read the other stories....
Review By [Eureka] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Gideon
Review:
The plot thickens (again)! next step is to check up on the immortals which have supposedly died I guess. Whatever has happened to them will be more complicated than I can imagine, to judge by the story so far. Keep up the good work!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from eriktheviking
Review:
And it gets twistier. Well written intrigue, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written chapter especially the gently written torture session.
Comments from author:
yes, that scene had to be written, for where the story's going, but I didn't want the story going too dark, plus not that good at writing gory torture scenes unless I've kept my muse up all night with a Resident Evil marathon.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Gideon
Review:
So someone is building up a list of immortals, but not killing them? I wonder why? It sounds like someone with experience at telling when someone is lying though -since they start by asking lots of irrelevent questions. This casts suspicion over members of the Lightman group, Oh no!
Comments from author:
no, not exactly...the torture done the way I describe it is actually a way of getting the victim to give you exactly what you need to know- just not right away because otherwise they get suspicious...that, and the guy doing the torture just purely enjoys torturing people and is glad for the opportunity to hone his art
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
An unexpected development. Great update, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon
Review:
So it might be an immortal hunting Watchers rather than a Watcher hunting Immortals? If he had been a bit smarter and not cut of their heads it might not have come to the attention of the Immortal community so soon. At least her "man on the inside" Thomas can help with any misdirection needed for the lightman group.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
And the intrigue and mystery keeps building, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and interesting pairing. Spot on with Cal.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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