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Review of chapter "Part 22 Communication" from bradsan
Review:
good story so far.

If I read it right Angel/Cordy/ Dawn and friends are stronger than Buffy and Faith and became immortal. Xander/Willow/Oz are as strong as Buffy and Faith and probably Immortal. Or are they all as strong as Buffy and Faith and everybody is immortal. Because I don't think that Dawn will like it becoming a demigod with a lifespan that is bigger than her mom and sister. I think Spike won't like it when he will outlive Buffy same goes for Faith and Xander.

I don't understand Buffy logic about Angel if she is gone stay with Spike well her friends don't like him either so she could lose her friends also. I know she didn't saw him yet but it will be the same. Buffy is in for a surprise when she meets Spike her mate. They all hate Spike as much as they hate Angel and if she is afraid to lose her friends because of Angel. However it was Xander who hated Angel and Spike not Willow. Still some vampire, one of the four horseman etc. His rate will be worse than Angels. Wonder how she is gone solve that.

I would say go for it if they can't cope it's their lost. She has to live with him and not the other way around. She don't judge their partners so you can presume they let her choose her own.

Wonder when you gone update this one.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 22 Communication" from falsegod
Review:
I only gave you a 5 because its half of what your main story thread would get, but seriously rewrite it and leave out the all the distraction
Review By [falsegod] • Date [23 Jun 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just one Night" from DragonBard
Review:
This is 'before' Angel lost his soul, so you're mixing up the timeline again.

The Halloween episode was early Season 2, while Faith was Season 3.
Comments from author:
I always mix up the time lines Its more fun that way. I never keep them on track so please forget what happened when it will only be more confusing.
Fire
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Level Field" from DragonBard
Review:
Faith isn't around yet.

Plus you originally said you were going to leave Spike as a vamp.
Comments from author:
He still is sort of.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 22 Communication" from djhardim
Review:
Considering the evil characters that you introduced, is it really necessary to bring in the First Evil and Glory?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 22 Communication" from Dragonelf
Review:
I like what you have done so far with the story and it will be interesting to see what will happen with the augmented characters in your story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 22 Communication" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you enjoyed it. Hope to see some updates on your work soon too.
Fire
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 22 Communication" from Eureka
Review:
Good story. Really like the premise of it, but...you really need to watch your spelling and punctuation. Also you mentioned Jessie McNally, but he isn't shown again so far, are you going to bring him out to re-meet Xander and Willow along with the rest of the gang? I mean he may be in the body of his cousin, but it is him, and Xander and Willow would LOVE it if he was back. (At least IMHO)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 22 Communication" from trongod
Review:
I don't get it, you have Clark/Superman disgusted at the idea of Angel/Buffy, and then later on you are bent on tieing Angel/Cordelia or the new Clark/Wonder TEEN together... Plus all the machinations of Janus to get them together... If there's disgust at the age difference for the first pairing, why not the second? Both girls are about the same age, the semi-male body in question is still that of a centuries dead man in his late twenties when he was Turned... Not seeing much differences here, Boss...

Even assuming that they all integrate their memories equally well, equally quickly, there's still the age difference.

Plus I never like Stalker!Corpse in the first place.You want him redeemed per canon, OK, let'em do it for himself somewhere else away from the rest of the crew.

Faith - like her upgrades, although I need to re read this to get a better sense of just when this is all occurring. So, back I go!!!
Review By [trongod] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 21 Chance and Change" from Genuka
Review:
Wonderful sentiments and I'm glad to see that we're starting to move along from Halloween night. I'm also very very glad that there's at least one star trek character involved, especially one who was trained in the use of herbs and plants as part of her family traditions and not just the regular medical training.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 20 The Soul's speak out sort of..." from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the newer chapters, though you forgot quotation marks or apostrophes for conversations taking place in the heads of characters. Also, why did Xander never interact with Steve?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 20 The Soul's speak out sort of..." from InsanitySorrow
Review:
Glory VS Dawn/Selene....This take the battle of the Titan to a whole new level. *snicker* I pretty sure that even The First Evil work together with Glory, it still hard to defeat this new and improved Scooby Gang. Too bad Drusilla is not in costume too because despite being loony and vampire, I kinda like her. One of my quirk of liking evil/bad chick that also insanely powerful. Please continue.
Review By [InsanitySorrow] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13 New Perspectives" from justapiranha
Review:
I got to chapter 12 waiting for something to happen, for this story to show some progress in the plot line... but you were still building the ground work for your story. I am board!!!!!! so I am taking you off the tracking list and putting you on the hidden list. 12 chapters and nothing has happened yet! It has a great concept but it is not moving along at all.
Comments from author:
Sorry about that. Real iife has been a bit stressful lately. I honestly have had no time to write due to health issues for myself and family along with school and work. It will eventually be completed but I understand your frustration. Thanks for being honest at least.
Fire
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 16 Organizes Chaos" from SledgeHammer
Review:
Giles 2.5, maybe? Ripper being 1.0, Rupert Giles being 2.0, and the upgraded Giles 2.5. The Iceberg Is Now MUCH Larger.
Comments from author:
Yes it is. I hope to get back to this soon. real life been a bit insane. Anyway thanks for the review.
Fire
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 20 The Soul's speak out sort of..." from Genuka
Review:
*shakes head* evil evil evil author *continues shaking head and walks away before demanding the next chapter... or doing something stupid to get said chapter*
Comments from author:
I am so not evil. I am puting out a chapter every couple of days or so on these stories. How's that evil? So want to beta some more for me? I have this one and one more that is not even posted yet . That one has about 5 or 6 chapters done.
Fire
Review By [Genuka] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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