Review of chapter "Birth of Greatness" from ridert
I don't normally do negative reviews but I have to say your stories need work they all read like storylines with the ocasional brief highlight instead of actual finished stories. On another note why do all of your central characters seem to have a dozen or more names and so much power as to come off like some kind of supreme being it's just too much. please understand that I'm not trying to say you shouldn't write just that you need to work on fleshing out your stories a bit more and maybe trying to keep the main character a little less unbelievable.
Review By [ridert
] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Restarting Life" from Difdi
Your plot outline looks great, I can't wait to read the actual story. Of course, the low rating is because you posted the outline in place of the story, turning what might or might not (we may never know) be a good story into total crap.
Review By [Difdi
] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]