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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
This has much potential.
I am a bit confused about him having the Dark Mark because I would think it is linked to Regulus' physical body and magic not Xanders.
Maybe it would appear but, maybe it wouldn't as well. My opinion is that it would not have appeared as there did not appear to be any major physical change - unless he was foolish enough to actually draw the dark mark on himself as part of the costume...then all bets are off. Even then there is the question of intent - does Xander have the right intent to actually get the Dark Mark? If not wouldn't the magic reject him?

Anyway please continue this if you can!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from drae
Review:
ANy chance of getting another chapter?
Review By [drae] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oldgirllost
Review:
So how come he kept the Dark Mark? Couldn't that be one of the things taken care of by the 'white glow'? Does that mean that he was always a Black. Come to think of it how did he get the costume anyhow?

This is yet another of your stories I hope to see more of. Hope this isn't a "Live In Hope Die in Despair" situation.

Thank you
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [31 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkplayer
Review:
It has potential. I look forward to seeing where it develops from here. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolflady
Review:
Oh! Dumbles is going to be sooooo unhappy! I can't wait to see the fun.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tjin
Review:
very interesting, i hope to see more soon.

-Tjin
Review By [Tjin] • Date [19 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Sweet! I loved this before and I love it still.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from whogives
Review:
I like the story.
Just one question, why does Xander have the dark mark anyway?
Review By [whogives] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FanFictionDreamer
Review:
I like it! please write more soon...
Review By [FanFictionDreamer] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
Intersting start, but I don't understand why the form change.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
Analysis - Xander fights the "good" fight. Having the Dark Mark on his arm - He's not going to be happy, in fact, I'd say he'd be down right pissed. So he's tired right now and all he needs is sleep, but when he wakes up, and having thought out the situation while he's slept and reviewed Regulus' memories... I'd say he's going to be even more pissed. And when he finds out that he really is a Black..... and meets Sirius. Oh the sparks are going to fly... good sparks - ie: in that when Xander hears the story of Sirius, he's going to be pissed about it.

All in all, a very good start, I look forward to reading more. And I hope you stay within the characterizations of Xander in Canon. Yes, I know this is AU, but still... I don't mind a "dark" Xander, but an 'evil' Xander is of the not good.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alltorian
Review:
Nice. Xander as a quasi-deatheater. I like it. I hope the next chapter comes out soon.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ahh I already read this one a while a go and wouldn't mind to see more of it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MajinJohnTitor
Review:
Nice one mate! So the Xandman has magic, and money!!!! Oh yeah, I think the world is about to be bitch-slapped by Xander!!
Review By [MajinJohnTitor] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lillyb
Review:
very good. the Changes are interesting but I hope his inter-Xanderness remains mostly unchanged.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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