Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cmiller
I am curious about if this is before Faith woke up because of Doyle being alive or after she woke up because of Tara being a part of the group. Either way it is really interesting, but if it's before you should so have Older Faith go out and get her younger self and bring said younger self back to Giles'.
Comments from author:
Younger Faith would be awake and moving around by now I wouild an I clearly made an error in not remembering that. But this is an old fic I did years ago and it is not finished. Plans and ideas are long gone and I do not know what I will do. (Razial)
Review By [Cmiller
] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Neverwillmini
Interesting. Maybe Amy can work with the others to get her younger self back to human AND get her help before she turns to dark magics. She's definitely the experienced one now, and I hope they'll be able to get Willow to wake up to what she's becoming before she has her dive into the dark.
I can see one change that's going to happen. This younger Riley doesn't have the life's worth of experience and hardship (what happened to his wife?) that toughened him up, so I think he's going to flake out on the group and take off earlier than cannon. Maybe they can at least get to him before he starts letting vamps suck on him.
Where in the 'before' timeline are they? Is this before Oz was taken by the Initiative? Is it before Adam? Or is the Initiative done with in town and Riley is the sole member left hanging around? Will the Spike realize the older version of him is souled?
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story but I must admit this is a very old fic I wrote a few years ago and have not finished, any ideas or plans I had for it are lost. I cannot say for sure where I planned this but I would say after season 4 and adam although Dawn has not shown up yet in the past. Oz still been there is an error I would say now and as for the elder spike been souled it never accured to me at the time as that had not happened in cannon yet. (razial)
Review By [Neverwillmini
] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]