Really, really like your take on Dawn's origins and am looking forward to seeing more.

I love the story!! The plot is very original, and I'm amazed at how in character everyone is! Reading this now and seeing you haven't updated since Nov is kind of sad though.. I really hope you decide to continue on with the story, because its fricken awesome!!

Oh my, this was a complete awesome chapter! I loved the confusing part in the beginning with Dawn's 'dream' and it's making me wonder if she's somehow Anita reincarnated or something? Hmm... Also very interesting that Dawn's now is a Necromancer or at least now coming into her powers. Very cool :)

Anyways, I'm loving this story, the plot is completely original and I definitely can't wait to read more! Sorry to hear about RL giving you so much trouble though :(( Thanks for updating!!

EDIT: I forgot to add, I LOVED the interaction between Dawn, Buffy and Willow. Very in-character and funny as well. Brilliant job!

Is Dawn a reincarnated Anita? Is Anita dead and came back as Dawn? That would be cool. This story is very original and loving it. Please update soon!

I like this. It's fun.

OMG!! I hope you update soon!! This story is great so far!!

I like this. It has potential. Continue please.

Very interesting second chapter! I'm very curious as to what's really going on... It's all very intriguing. I wonder why that vampire called Dawn Master and what happened to her eyes and why? Also what's up with her feelings of deja vu?

Also, will Spike realize that somethings different about Dawn?

Anyways, thanks for the update! I can't wait to read more!!

This is very very interesting!

Nice - I can't wait for Dawn to start collecting guns or snuggling up to vampires (like Spike!) Buffy will not be happy :)

Interesting start!

more please

like it so far. would love to help you with it. you still looking for a beta??

I hope you continue the story. I am confused though. Is Dawn actually Anita or is she her little sister? When I started the story I thought that Dawn was Anita's little sister, but then as the story progressed with the dream being from Anita's perspective and then at the end of it Dawn waking up made me start to think that Dawn might be Anita, but then who is the second girl? Either way with Dawn being Anita (something I have never seen and am wondering how it would be pulled off) or Dawn being Anita's little sister I can't wait to see what will happen and I really hope that you continue the story. Both sound like very interesting ideas.

you're supposed to be confused... don't worry, you'll get it eventually

Oooh, very interesting beginning! I would definitely love to read more!!!