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Buffy and the Haunted Pyramid

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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from WhippingDawn
Review:
A beautiful story. I am always glad to see Buffy alone in an alternate universe, and being naked from the beginning to the end only adds to the pleasure!

I have noted your challenge, and I may answer it.

ANSWER: Not decided yet, I just read the story today and actually I am already writing two stories, so I will think about it until an idea comes to me, then I'll make an outline.

Now, is the love interest (female of course) absolutely necessary?

And: is there any hope that you will come back to "The Ship of Lost Souls"?
Comments from author:
And do you have an idea what kind of adventure she will have?
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams and Ancient Ruins" from (Current Donor)KColl
Review:
Interesting story, but there one thing I really, really do not like: stories with Buffy as the central char.

Edit: I happen to think it's pretty trollish to seek out a writer's stories to simply comment that you don't
like the central pairing when the intelligent thing to do would be not to read them in the first place.
And turnabout being fair play, I merely commented that I don't like stories with Buffy
as a central char.
Comments from author:
Very funny. BTW this is a Buff fanfic site and not Faith/Xander (BTW a complete OOC pairing) fanfic site. And there is a big difference between liking a story idea (but not one little detail) and telling this the writer and writing anegative review out of revenge for not liking a review!
Review By [(Current Donor)KColl] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dapsy
Review:
I like Teje... and what a switch of a culture for Buffy... will she stick to her own old Sunnydale morality or perhaps readjust a bit and have own slav... err... servants.

One thing about not killing humans... as in "never" doing that... I think people forget about it, but when defending against knights when they were after Dawn while fighting on top of the motor home, I think she most definitely killed a human by throwing an axe into his chest(Spiral, Season 5 I think). I think she really avoids it... but by the end of the series I think it might have happened once or twice without too much suffering on her part.
Comments from author:
I've completely forgotten her fight against the Knights of Byzantium, but that was clearly self defense and thus does not count. Knights of Byzantium (and human warlocks and sorcerors) were involved in the supernatural and that why Buffy's oath against killing humans did not apply.
Remember Buffy's slayer dream? She has to change. And that does not only mean that she has to kill, but it also means that modern American morality has no place in her life anymore. And there is the part of the Nemedian Chronicles which tells us what she will become some day.
I do not know if Teje will appear in other stories.
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from robertlisle
Review:
Great story and an unique crossover.
Comments from author:
Yes, it is unique and that's better than just another crossover with Stargate or with Supernatural etc. Some ideas and crossovers have been done to death.
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from AllenPitt
Review:
The Hyborian Age will never be the same. can't you just picture Giles pouring over ancient texts and finding mention of her? heh.....
Comments from author:
That's a great idea.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayer, the Berserker and the Demon" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent battle scenes. You certainly have caught the spirit of the Conan stories. I hope you remember that Conan was not only 'mighty thewed' but was actually a smart cookie too. I'm glad Buffy got over the whole "Slayers can't kill Humans" hangup in time to chop up some bad guys. And get the naked chick. Lol! I look forward to reading more of your delightful story.

Edit: To fill out the barbarian swordswoman cliche Buffy needs some thigh high black leather boots, a small loin cloth, and a nice weapons belt with a big sword. The chain mail metal bra is optional. Lol!
Comments from author:
I know that Conan was very intelligent. It was the movies (especially the second one!) and the pastiges who made him into the dumb, magic-hating barbarian. But REH's Conan is very different (and he was never a slave!). If Buffy will meet Conan? I really don't know.
Buffy will not be able to change her style of clothing in this story. There is only one chapter to write. But I have plans for the next one. And there will be a challenge.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayer, the Berserker and the Demon" from AllenPitt
Review:
Doesn't look good for everyone's favorite Aesir berserker. Do you think he's got a chance with Buffy even though they didn't start out exactly right? heh....
I wonder if there are slayers & a council this far back in time.
Comments from author:
Askel is ... Do you really think that I will tell you. ;)
If there is a council and an active slayer I really do not know (yet).
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the Desert" from Dapsy
Review:
Just wanted to say Hi... so... "Hi" :D ^_^
Comments from author:
I hope that you like it.
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Slayer, the Berserker and the Demon" from Tempi
Review:
Well hopefully the next chapter is entitled "The Happy Slayer and the Grateful Priestess"! ;-)

I look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Yes, there wil be femslash in the final chapter, but it will have a different name.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle in the Hall" from Iceflame
Review:
Well done. I can imagine since the Stygians are out of the way, the northman sees an opportunity to gain vengeance, and acquire an after duel treat. He's in for a shock I'd say; despite her small size, I'd say she approaches or exceeds Conan's strength, and likely even FASTER than that most worthy killing machine >:).
Comments from author:
That would be too obvious. *evil grin*
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [26 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle in the Hall" from JoeDineen
Review:
I am really enjoying the story. It is very much in the vein of REH though with some spelling mistakes.
First paragraph
"He could crop his khopesh and clutch his throat ...." I presume you meant drop

paragraph 7 "surrender oder die" I suspect you meant "or"
Comments from author:
Thanks for showing me the mistakes. They have been corrected.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [26 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle in the Hall" from grd
Review:
Hope never to hear? I say pretty axe. Buffy want! Slay the bugger in the most humiliating way. Buffy banter to drive him insane while she does it.
Comments from author:
That would be too easy. *evil grin*
Review By [grd] • Date [26 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle in the Hall" from AllenPitt
Review:
Neat--the nice Aesir has come along to help Buffy, no doubt wishing to atone for his crimes. Or something like that. Meanwhile she's got a lot of explaining to do, interrupting a peaceful cult's religious ceremonies.
Comments from author:
Wait and see! The next chapter will explain some things.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Inside the Black Pyramid" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Well now she seems to be getting into the swing of things.
Comments from author:
Blood will flow and it will not be Buffy's.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams and Ancient Ruins" from FireFlash
Review:
Interesting beginning. Its rare to see this particular crossover, and it looks good so far. The only complaint I have is the shortness of chapters. But that's more of a personal preference thing; I don't like having to click to a new chapter every 2 minutes. However, the first 4 chapters were written in the space of 10 days, so that's good. :)

Keep up the good work. I look forward to the epic!
Comments from author:
I could have written more, but English is not my first language so I have some problems. So the chapters will stay that short.
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [20 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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