Review of chapter "Epilogue" from DavidFraser
Okay... The Prologue/Introduction with the FanFiction/Wincest parts added in (!?) is almost off-putting, as if it's not really required. Sorry.
As for the rest of the story...
The structure, imagining of the characters and scenes is really good and does add up to a small story really worth the effort to continue past my first impression.
Overall I did really enjoy the read.
Well done !
Comments from author:
Thanks for giving my story a chance and reading beyond the Prologue. I appreciate the feedback.
Review By [DavidFraser
] • Date [13 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]