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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from CageFire
Review:
Nice story. Though some of the mystery worlds they've gone to remain a mystery to me. You've only left /really/ subtle clue that I can't figure out. Either I'm not familiar with the shows, or it's just not clicking for me.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [25 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from docfeng
Review:
need more please
Review By [docfeng] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from mendal
Review:
"Prophecy said I was going to die, Xander said different,” Buffy replied." No he didn't buffy still died.
Review By [mendal] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [24 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from MasterRahl
Review:
going to "Small Wonder" and buying Belldandy was a nice idea although it looks like she might not be much help with housework however considering the three's activities they really should have asked for an older version.
Review By [MasterRahl] • Date [11 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful chapter, thanks!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The S is silent, in fact it’s non-existant!" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
Wait, I missed something... what the heck happened to Harmony and why is she supernatural now?

ETA: Ah, okay. I was right - I did miss something. Coolness.
Comments from author:
The trio went into a porn and brought out The Layer, The Layer jumped from Faith to Harmony, finding her a much better fit.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
Well, that kinda tossed the whole housekeeper idea in the toilet. ;)

And wah! There's no more story. Hurry up and finish it. We wants more we does...

ETA: *snicker* That could work.

Fun story. I was happy to see a new chapter pop up and put it back into "Latest".
Comments from author:
No, they simply have to tell her not to use that rule and train her in how to actually do housekeeping.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
"'Not yet,' Buffy agreed. 'But have you done enough to earn the right to walk away yet?'"

You have to *earn* the right to walk away from a dangerous, nightly undeclared war that you weren't drafted for? Since when? And according to who? (o0)

Why the hell would Cordelia have been voting on the "Let's keep Xander out" thing, anyway? She was barely talking to anyone in the group at this point.

ETA: In canon she wasn't, not during the Jhe demon thing. (And yes, I am aware that you left canon by the wayside early on.)

*shakes head* Someone should swat Buffy for that comment. Okay, I'll grant that it's in character for Buffy.
Comments from author:
She considers them tainted. Cordelia wasn't talking to anyone in the group at that point? Then why was she fighting alongside them?
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting work on the new chapter, never heard of "Small Wonder" though. I look forward to more of your work.

-Can they go ito cartoons?
Comments from author:
They have a smurf infestation, so yes.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
" holding out a small purple pouch, actually the Crown Royal bag he normally kept his D&D dice in. "

Snicker. Now I can tell you were an actual gamer. ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
"I guess someone told her to go have a long cold one and chill the fuck out and she took it literally.” - Faith

That line cracks me up every time I read this story. I may have to steal that from you. ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Lokilos
Review:
Yay! A Small Wonder shout out! I would randomly mention this show to my friends and they never knew what I was talking about.
Review By [Lokilos] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from armyguy
Review:
Hah! So all that trouble to get a 'maid' that will do as bad a job as possible to get out of it! Looking forward to reading what you come up with next!
Review By [armyguy] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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