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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Any chance that you will be adding the rest of this story? I still see only one chapter.
We know Buffy goes for (much) older men so is there more of a spark in that coffee than just old friends?
Comments from author:
Perhaps. I'd forgotten about it, and never received the second file back from my beta. Shall see if I may remedy this immediately.

However, also now thinking I may break it up into more than two chapters.

Thank you for the notice!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
Review:
Either you put in the wrong word count or a part of the story got lost, but the header says 1750 words and the story is only actually 300something long. Personally, I'm tending more towards parts of the story missing.

Check it please?

Regards,
Faith
TtH Mod
Comments from author:
Actually, the problem is that it isn't supposed to be listed as complete. I must have just missed that bit, now fixed. With two more (obviously short) chapters, the word count is right.

So, parts of the story are missing, just...not in the way you meant.

Thanks!
Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Uncle Duncan is so sweet :) I would love to see Buffy and himself teaching each other a few tricks!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CousinMary
Review:
I really liked how you raised the Dawn question. If you continue with this, I'd read it. Good work :)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
This is really good.
I would love a follow up.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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