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Review of chapter "Birth of a Goddess" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
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You don't introduce the characters enough for someone who isn't a rabid reader of the X-men to know even the least bit of who they are and what they do.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of a Goddess" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Not too bad, a trifle too compressed.

Also, why not six months either way? I mean, ONE HOUR ain't much, and surely is not enough to know mortal experience as the Fates decreed.

I seem to recall the Olympians alloted six months back home and six in the realm of Hades to Persephone over what happened while she was taken there by the Lord of the Underworld.
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because the Gods don't want her to have any time with Erica
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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