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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KevinSchultz
Just got finished watching the whole seriers of Pushing Daisies on Netflix - good job catching the tone of the narrarator: omniscient 3rd person narrative allows emotional distance from the subject matter, while at the same time giving us a fairy-tale like tone. Also, good job on the end-of-the chapter hook, which also feels very much Pushing Daisy-esque.
Review By [KevinSchultz] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eponine
This looks like it's going to be interesting, unique, AND well written. Olive and Lorne. I can't see why no one's thought of it before, because no matter what the context, a story starring those two can't help but be fantastic! You're a genius.
Review By [eponine] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Oh, what a great start! I'll be eagerly awaiting the continuation of this story of Lorne's search for 'redemption of the non-violent variety' and its intersection with the universe of a certain pie-maker.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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