I like this! I hope you write alittle more , maybe Zanes reaction or just what happens next :)

Oooh! Just add dancing and you have an Insta-Mate! Very nice fic. I would love to see this continued. Zane is a cool character and I always like seeing him in fics :)

Loving this. Can't wait to read more when you write it.

I loved this story and personally I think that you should continue it please. it would be interesting and amusing to see how dawn reacts to Anita. course thats just me I'm not really an Anita fan.

Oh, I really loved this! Great backstory with Dawn leaving Buffy because of the Immortal and heading out on her own traveling the States, and of course her ending up in St. Louis :)

I also loved the instant attraction between her and Zane and the twist with them being mates was totally awesome as well. So she is or isn't a were though? Maybe she was bitten/scratched but never fully turned?

Anyways, I loved this to bits and I definitely look forward to reading more if you decide to continue it! Thanks for writing!!!

Love this one shot. I really hope you post more in it's verse

Thank you! I have more than a few ideas for where I want this to go but I promised myself that I'd get my other story finished before taking on another full length fic. Thankfully, it's almost complete. :)