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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Narf
Review:
not Bad at all. I'm a big fan of the GOd of War Crossovers. The game is one of the best series that has come out in a long time and when turn into a crossover fanfiction it rocks even more. Keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
tx for the review and I have to agree to the games. I loved them.
Review By [Narf] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Selias
Review:
Pretty interesting stuff. You crossing Hercules with it too?
Comments from author:
tx for the review and I already did with the Zeus from ch 1...granted not obvious then, but now it should be
Review By [Selias] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from eriktheviking
Review:
The storyline is familiar but the twist with Tony having a brain and ability is leading in an interesting new direction.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Tony is either working for or a son of Ares, at a guess. I realised from the casual manner of Zeus that we had crossed over, literally, from the nasty pantheon of GoW to the more refined one of Hercules: the Legendary Journeys and Xena: Warrior Princess.

I have to admit, acting as a teacher and father once again was likely the only way Kratos would ever pull himself out of the chaos and vengeful mindset he had forged.

I just hope a certain actor gets a briefing before he meets Xander, or the Hellmouthy goodness is gonna make somebody REALLY lose his temper for the first time in a LONG time.. with accompanying collateral damage!
Comments from author:
thank you for the review and yes your guess is correct regarding the gods and yepp was the only way that made sense to me....

and you can be sure...there will be some fireworks on the Hellmouth soon :)
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
Again, you always write amazing stories. Very good. I can see it all leading up to something, not sure what, because there is so many ways you can take this. Can't wait to see more. :D
Comments from author:
thank you for the review and yes atm in time it can go in several directions and I actually have three in my head now I just need to use one :)
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from trongod
Review:
I get the feeling that Kevin Sorbo's on his way to what may turn into a firefight, just to meet his long unknown son... Hopefully, whoever Tony Harris really is won't ventilate any of my favorite ladies and a new favorite lady before he gets there, or after, for that matter.

Good to see this added to, hope your Muse picks on you till you add lots more chapters... :^p
Comments from author:
as I said it was kinda obvious :) and for Tony..I don't think you'll like him much in the next ch :) Sadly my muse isn't the problem, the ideas are there just my writing time is not very much.
Review By [trongod] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Razial
Review:
nice chapter and I think I know who xander's real father is, I loved the way buffy got chewed out for been a blond idiot. It seems Tony is not going to be so easy to get rid of in this story and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next. Plus I am certain I know who is coming to Sunnydale. keep it up (razial)
Comments from author:
your guess was correct of course, was kinda obvious, at least I think so and yeah Buffy played them well, seems like she learned a bit from X :)
Review By [Razial] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Toraneko
Review:
Yay, an update. I thought this story had been abandoned, though I'm glad to see it's not. Great chapter, keep up the good work, and please don't keep me in suspense so long... pretty pretty please?
Comments from author:
nope not abandoned, but as I said in another review I have the writing pace of a snail. sorry for that.
Review By [Toraneko] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Omegaprime
Review:
Interesting chapter with a possibility that Xander will surprise everyone when he wakes up. (daddy is SO dead if he harms Xander's family)

Hmmm, is it just me or did Buffy outsmarted everyone?

It looks like Kratos and Xander were warming up to each other.

And who is the mystery actor father of Xander?

Will the gang accept the new, more deadlier Xander?

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
He will indeed.

Yes, it looks like she did :)

They were together for 12 years and even if training as a Spartan under him was probably Hell, Xander knew why he did it.

To the actor shouldn't be hard to guess and I thought it was kinda obvious, at least if you know the series were he comes from. Not to many Greeks out there who have something to do with gods :)

To if they will accept him...we will see.

Tx for the review.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DarthPayne
Review:
:)

I do hope we'll be seing more chapters in this fic now.
Comments from author:
there will be more yes, but as you might have noticed my writing pace is that of a snail (a very slow one)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DarthPayne
Review:
This is so cool.

I only know of one or two GoW x-overs.

Edit: After a lot of digging i found the stories.
Dunno if you've read them already. http://www.tthfanfic.org/AuthorStories-4629/gunsmith.htm
Comments from author:
really? wouldn't mind if you point me to them *g*

Edit: yes, read and loved them, tx for pointing them out.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Razial
Review:
looking good here, seems like it could go anywhere. I wonder what you have planned next

david
Review By [Razial] • Date [28 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Eureka
Review:
OK so what the heck is Tony?? Why would he have an arsenal in the cellar? Silver compass huh? I do so hope that Giles and Buffy are ready for that SOB to come into the house firing. I already read one story tonight that had Buffy dead, don't care to read another, even if Buffy is a be-otch at times.
Comments from author:
ahh even if I don't like Buffy much I promise not to kill her in this fic (at least I don't have any plans for that yet) for that you can thank NotJana and her story Dawning Familarity...even if I seldom read Buffy centric stories I really enjoyed that one and so it try to be nice to her for once *g* and to Tony....some people have a past even if they now like to crawl into a bottle more than anything else.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [28 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
A cracking good story and a very unexpected development with Tony.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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