i'm a fan your work and i love this story as well i tend to reread your work when i'm bored.but great job on the story and i would to see you update some stuff
Review By [ronin] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow, just wow. I was worried for a while that Xander was going to end up a mindless weapon of destruction, but it turned out to be just a phase he was going through. I love how the Wizards keep showing up and causing him trouble. I love how he keeps pushing DC Super supervillainess in unexpected directions. So far I if I have kept track correctly he has diverted one completely, changed the direction of two slightly. This is great! I love how he is changing Clark, Superman is going to be less of a boyscout in this version. It also appears he is changing Lex, which would be great!
Wonderful story, I hope you continue!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Interesting story so far, but I really think it should have been a series since it's got two distinct story arcs with their own independent driving conflicts. (The first one ends with the mayor's death and Xander getting the inheritance would either be part of the last chapter or part of the epilogue. The second one begins with Xander's departure.)
I'd also really like to have seen more time and detail spent on the first story arc to flesh it out.
Just going through my recommendations and happened upon this again. Figured it was due a reread. Still as good as it was the first couple times. Hoping to see more, particularly the meet and greet between Xander and Kara. Maybe a Xander vs. Clark on red kryptonite perhaps. Not too sure where you can take this in the long run though, Xander's just too powerful and there's really no one who can even challenge him anymore. Clark on red kryptonite maybe.
Review By [Peaslums] • Date [26 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Just finished reading the entire story. Great work so far! It's been a great read.
My only point of critique is that it seems kinda rushed. You could easily make it twice as long, without adding anything new to the plot, simply by expanding on what you've already written.
Either way, keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of this story sometime soon :)
Review By [SirMethos] • Date [24 Apr 12] • Not Rated
I love how your Lex is turning out, and for that matter how Clark is turning out (less of a angsty little brooder). Thanks for the great read. Looking forward seeing what crazyness happens next.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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