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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from Radiofishlips
Review:
its an interesting idea you have and i like the way its written and comming out....

now for the real question ... will there be any more ?
Review By [Radiofishlips] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from Netchka
Review:
Cool story. More please. Hopefully more chapters coming soon?
Review By [Netchka] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from garrycooper
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More, More, More, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from Geyer
Review:
Interesting beginning! Both Daniel and Dawn are right to be paranoid, and I like your hint about dueling hackers. Since the President knows about both the Council and the Stargate program, at least there's someone to step in before things get too out of hand once things escalate. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from tracysgate
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im intrigued... o.O
please tell me the "hes actually more buffys type than mine" comes back to bite her in the butt lol
Review By [tracysgate] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from devilnblujeans
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Great start! I'm a sucker for a good Daniel/Dawn story, so I'm hooked.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Review By [devilnblujeans] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Childhood's Monsters" from Thedruid
Review:
Interesting beginning, and well written. But I think your charcters are a bit OOC, and your forceing situations to conform to what you want them to be. Dawn becomeing parinoid because Daniel can fight well? And then giveing an explination like a crazy person who expects the other person to believe them, then assumeing they don't? Daniel not trying to find out more from Dawn herself before calling SGC.

It's not much, but enough to be jarring.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [29 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from dreameralways
Review:
"dueling hackers"
I don't think that it would be much of a contest. Willow can cheat.
This is cute and I'm enjoying it. I look forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
I seriously wish I had one of those computers. For real. Anyhow, great chapter!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from SlowMercury
Review:
I really like this! It's got kickass Dawn and intelligent Jackson and lots of healthy paranoia. :) Please keep up the good work!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from RevDorothyL
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This is really good! Great work on the voices and descriptive work, and you had me hooked on the story after the second paragraph of the first chapter, at the latest.

Looking forward to more, and hoping you'll be able to update soon.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from ivanjedi
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My my, that's some mess you've made. I love Buffy/Stargate stories where misunderstandings muck things up, and this is an invitation for things to get mixed up
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from AllenPitt
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Nice to see a crossover where Willow isn't instantly able to bypass SGC computer security with ease. Even with magical assist, Sam has made it harder; not to mention with all the aliens constantly doing it, the safeguards are probably the greatest on earth. Looks like you're setting up an alien threat that is also Old One related, nice idea. Maybe Illyria can get involved?
The slayers will think the SGC is another Initiative, the SGC might think the council is evidence of a Foothold situation.
Comments from author:
I don't know Illyria's character except through a limited number of fanfics. I don't know how well I can portray her. But the rest of your scenario is ... *evil grin*
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from aveave
Review:
Great chapter. :)
Review By [aveave] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Phoning Home" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Ok this is interesting, not sure I'm into the overly organised Council set-up but we'll see where that goes. Liked your characterisations of Dawn and Daniel. Putting a 'track' on this to see how it goes.

DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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