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Review of chapter "Chapter 30: Revelations" from DieselDriver
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Ahh. If Michelle is "not so special" then when Buffy and Willow get connected, the top slayer and the top witch, There is BOUND to be a seriously powerful result. Looking forward muchly to the next part.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28: Love" from DieselDriver
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Hmm. very salacious. I skipped over most of it. maybe it's pertinent to the rest of the story but I'll worry about that later.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 27: Harmonious Night" from DieselDriver
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You refer to Anti-pasta, are you sure you don't mean Antipasto?

http://recipes.search.yahoo.com/search?p=antipasto%20salad
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 23: Compensation" from DieselDriver
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Ok, who is this business woman and what have you done with the real Buffy???
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20: Changes" from DieselDriver
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My brother watches Castle & Becket. I never have. I guess I'm going to have to now. Dang. More TV to watch. I don't have time. I'd rather be reading. I really liked this chapter but I'd guess, based on not knowing the character except from here, that Kate does not yet believe. I'm wondering if Alexis will be showing her the fireplace poker when they get back to Dad's apartment.

PS: why are the called "apart-ments", when they are so together? Shouldn't they be called "Togetherments"?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Introduction" from DieselDriver
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Really good chapter. I know a lot of people don't particularly care for the parts where they sit down and explain things (can't think of the word I wanted) but to me it's a vital part of the story getting a lot of information and attitudes of the characters out to the reader without breaching the 4th wall. You did a good job of it here.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Quandary" from DieselDriver
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Don't understand why this has an FR21 rating. Seems pretty tame to me. Good story but tame.
Comments from author:
I do not rate each chapter since I don't want someone to get into the story and then get upset because of the explicit nature of some of the later chapters, the rating is for the entire series - it will get explicit further into the story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: The Scene" from DieselDriver
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Lot of good information furthering the story here but I don't really care so much for the jumping back and forth in point of view. It's a little confusing sometimes. The idea carries the story for me at this point. I don't understand big cities and the people that live there though so maybe that has something to do with it. I wouldn't live in New York for a Million dollars a year tax free.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Awakening" from DieselDriver
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Good start. I like the idea of an irresistible urge to go somewhere and do something that leads to an epiphany of sorts. It's a start that was well described and I certainly am going to read the rest. Hope the rest is just as well written.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 26: A Father" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
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Suddenly Mr. Wellington’s face went to complete shock; he could barely get the next words out, “This really is Buffy Summers, your Slayer?”

“Yes, Buffy is, was my Slayer. We’ve gone beyond that now. She was the last Chosen One.”


Both Kendra and Faith were CHOSEN after Buffy, That makes Faith the last Chosen One.
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29: Confrontations" from DragonBard
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BTW: Alexis's mother is still alive. She's just even more of a child than her father is.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30: Revelations" from DragonBard
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Very nice, but Buffy forgot to mention that resurrection spells only work if the death was directly caused by magic.

Interestingly enough, the Killing Curse from Harry Potter probably counts.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30: Revelations" from Grimoire
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This story manages to be both a coming of age story, and a BTVS and Castle tribute at the same time. This story kept me engrossed, so much that I lost sleep and work while reading it.
Review By [Grimoire] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30: Revelations" from BrownFinderth
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Very, very exciting piece!! I couldn't put it down!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30: Revelations" from Gideon
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Scary power levels going on there on both Slayer and witch sides. I hope Buffy has good luck with Mr Wellington, I don't think he will react as well as Mr Castle has been so far :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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