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Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from DieselDriver
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That was cool! Landing a 747 by magic is just magic! er... Really cool! er... I wanta see!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 42: The Meeting" from DieselDriver
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I so wish you'd made up a fictional president and family. Having a character in the story that is the analog of a person you don't like is, in this case different from having an analog of a dead person such as Hitler or Pol Pot. Having it be a live person still in his position of power makes the story less palatable even though the story itself is excellent. It's not the same as disliking a fictional character like Voldamort or Sauron. Severely limits my willful suspension of disbelief.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 41: Night Out" from DieselDriver
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Cool Chapter. Have to wonder if Sara is going to end up as a witch or maybe a watcher... Slayer? No not a watcher slayer... Sheesh.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35: A New Watcher" from DieselDriver
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Pretty funny chapter. Poor Tom is having his world view turned upside down and shaken violently.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 32: Conversation" from DragonBard
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I don't think Willow's hair is really auburn, but eh, to each their own.

Also, if the bonding has made Michelle a Willow class witch, then what will the bonding do to WILLOW?
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from BrownFinderth
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Really got into this story! Eager to see what publicity may have gathered to theirselves!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from Gideon
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If there is video of real magic happening out there than it will be very difficult to conceal. Maybe time for the President to announce on TV that magic is real? Or maybe he can just say that it was high tech training that allowed them to do what they did. I'm glad to see that whatever research they managed to do in the interim was enough to enable to bring in Renee and use her expertise where it was needed. Can't wait to see what you have planned for part 3!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from maxthehobbit
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You never disappoint. This episode was just great. Loved the interaction between the Slayers/witches/SAS. The hijacking was also well done. Throwing Obama into the picture was well done in a way that was semi-realistic. Going to start reading the last part now, I know I'll like it, just wondering what else you're going to come up with. You're a very creative writer and I enjoy your somewhat wild imagination.
]Thanks for posting and sharing this wonderful story.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from deathgeonous
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Wow, Price William, President Obama, and terrorists. A very political part two. I like. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [23 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 42: The Meeting" from TwoBlackDragons
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You should make up a President and not use the real one. It's part of the site rules. I did a challenge using General Patton and it was removed because he was a real person.

Other than that and some spelling mistakes it's a great fic. Using sparing instead of sparring for instance.
Comments from author:
I read the site rule concerning real people and thought I had stayed within the guidelines, specifically it states you can use "real politicians in positions of power", with some limits and restrictions which I thought I stayed within. I guess they'll let me know if I didn't.

I've been trying to fix the typos as I find them, thanks for the report.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [21 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 32: Conversation" from KiryD
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as well Willow; ABOUT FUCKING TIME!!!

Hmm, Willow and Buffy are Sunnydale High colors....
Review By [KiryD] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from PATM
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Very entertaining read. I'm not surprised when my blood pressure responded to terrorists in a
plane. Effective suppression tactics. I paused the eyes when that word for chamber appeared in
the sentences, luckily context helped solved the definition problem I had with that word. Smiles
to you.
Review By [PATM] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from MrPowell
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hmmm
Me thinks that Castle and Beckett will not be very happy... Speaking of which, we haven't seen much or even any of them... what's going on in their lives?
otherwise? Alexis is slightly OoC... but some of it can be explained but the experiences in the story...
curious as to where you plan to take this in the next part
Review By [MrPowell] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
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I'm enjoying this series a lot, and looking forward to part 3 with bated breath.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 45: The Circle" from (Recent Donor)TannimU
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This has been an awesome fic and a way better series! I really like how you're switching the perspectives between the major characters. They all feel "real" and their views are quite interesting. The relationship between the gals (especially Buffy and Dawn) is amazing. They may not always agree with each other but that doesn't stop them from loving each other. Buffy's behavior in particular is just so spot on, especially her reactions to the changes in the relationships. And then you had to introduce President Obama, and wow it just got better. His whole needing to go away and think before asking questions just seemed so real. Great job! Now hurry and gimme more! I want to know about Buffy and Willow's appearance. Have they stopped aging?
Review By [(Recent Donor)TannimU] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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