Nice..... just, nice, it has a good pace. A decent length for the most part, long enough that most of the information is given but not overly word and a enjoyable storyline. Keep it up.
I love this story. I hope you decide to post more and soon. I am curious as to whether Xander will ever be able to control his shifts and who else is going to pop up along the way.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ugh, Bayformers. At least in text I can imagine them as their real selves, rather than robo-nudists. Other than that (and you lose two points for it) this is an entertaining story, and one I would continue reading as Xander continues on his travels. Could you at least use the Transformers: Prime version of Arcee (still blue with a few pink trim strips, but fully humanoid, and with a warrior-woman persona that would fit right in with the Slayers) or whichever robot is designated as his Autobot contact? Primeverse styling (especially Bumblebee) is still heavily enough influenced by Bayformers that it fits together, but they at least look like Transformers and not something by H R Giger.
-dNN
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Nice! Pretty original, as far as I know. I am slightly surprised that Sam (Carter) actually called Xander an asset, since, well, SG-1 does kinda have a history of insisting that humans and aliens still have rights... thte Tollan come to mind.
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
I am glad that Sunnydale and Africa has not stopped Xander from enjoying comicbooks. The companys can do that themselves And Jack almost jumping to go is very amusing Hoping for more Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [20 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Michaelsuave
Review:
Very interesting. I'm not sure if I like Xander being pushed around as much as he is by everybody, but its well written, humorous, and an interesting plot with lots of crossovers. I say good job and keep up the good work.
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [18 Feb 11] • Not Rated