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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from named
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Nice..... just, nice, it has a good pace. A decent length for the most part, long enough that most of the information is given but not overly word and a enjoyable storyline. Keep it up.
Review By [named] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AonGealach
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I love this story. I hope you decide to post more and soon. I am curious as to whether Xander will ever be able to control his shifts and who else is going to pop up along the way.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlueEyedJedi
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Merry Christmas, and to all a good life. Prayers for a update are always included.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from nFaele
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Fun story. Thanks for writing, and posting.
Review By [nFaele] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from GravyBaby
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MUST HAVE MORE!! I swear this is damn entertaining. Just the right amount of action and comedy to balance each other and keep a reader interested.
Review By [GravyBaby] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from dialNforNinja
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Ugh, Bayformers. At least in text I can imagine them as their real selves, rather than robo-nudists. Other than that (and you lose two points for it) this is an entertaining story, and one I would continue reading as Xander continues on his travels. Could you at least use the Transformers: Prime version of Arcee (still blue with a few pink trim strips, but fully humanoid, and with a warrior-woman persona that would fit right in with the Slayers) or whichever robot is designated as his Autobot contact? Primeverse styling (especially Bumblebee) is still heavily enough influenced by Bayformers that it fits together, but they at least look like Transformers and not something by H R Giger.

-dNN
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from anpu
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Excellent story. Fun. Was Xander Wolverine or Sabretooth in chapter one?
Review By [anpu] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from shadowflame
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Nice! Pretty original, as far as I know. I am slightly surprised that Sam (Carter) actually called Xander an asset, since, well, SG-1 does kinda have a history of insisting that humans and aliens still have rights... thte Tollan come to mind.
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Stormguard
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*chuckle*
As long as this doesn't get out of hand it should be good.
Review By [Stormguard] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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ahh Magneto rules *g* and now the invade a Comic Con? oho.....
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Creamy
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It's so nice to come back to a fic and find a new chapter. Thanks for the great laugh.
Review By [Creamy] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LFW
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I am glad that Sunnydale and Africa has not stopped Xander from enjoying comicbooks. The companys can do that themselves
And Jack almost jumping to go is very amusing
Hoping for more
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [20 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Michaelsuave
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Very interesting. I'm not sure if I like Xander being pushed around as much as he is by everybody, but its well written, humorous, and an interesting plot with lots of crossovers. I say good job and keep up the good work.
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [18 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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