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Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from Beneficia
Review:
I can really see Buffy falling in love with Charlie. He'd be a great guy for her. I would definitely like to see a Twilight altverse fic with Buffy as Bella's stepmom.

"Sooo... you've fallen in love with a vampire and your his soulmate. Bella, we need to talk..." :D

But I can see how that would be a very large project you might not be inspired to undertake. But if your muse ever *is* inspired I would be happy to be cheerleader for that fic.
Review By [Beneficia] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awwwww what an awesome little one shot!!! I would love to see you expand on this story!!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from LeaFairy
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Aww, this was just Wow! Really simplistic and beautifully romantic story. The Buffy/Charlie pairing is completely perfect (at least IMHO) and I love that Buffy gets her happily 'normal' ever after life with him. *sighs* At least for now... LOL.

Absolutely lovely story!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I can't wait to write more of this pair. Seeing Buffy trying to handle married life amuses me immensely.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from yoyoente
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*cackles wildly* Oh I just love how you added that little bit in about there being no vampires or werewolves in Forks. I can just imagine Buffy coming up to Charlie going, "uh...hate to break it to you...but..."
*snorts* Let's see Edward sneak into Bella's room with a Slayer right next door. HA!
Review By [yoyoente] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from KnightOwl
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I loved the story. I especially liked the "And then she lived". I'd love to see her reaction when she finds out there are vampires and werewolves in this quiet town.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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awww/ please don't end there!
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from Zing
Review:
This is a very sweet story! I wish it wasn't a one-shot, as I would really love to see everyone's reaction, and Buffy's reaction to Edward's family! :) I would not have every imagined a Charlie/Buffy working, but you pulled it off beautifully.

Thanks for the pick me up,
Kristy
Review By [Zing] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from joshlamont
Review:
XD Oh, God. That's so unfair. And very sweet, but wow. Mad props!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from tals
Review:
This is so nice. Very quiet and calm and undramatic, and just lovely. You get a real sense of two people who are just comfortable with eachother, and in love without the need for big gestures, or worrying about looking perfect, and so on.

You manage to convey in a short time the feel of two people in an established relationship, who just love eachother for the everyday stuff, and for who they really are, instead of some idea of some romantic, dramatic love. (Buffy/Angel was much more about being in love with the idea of being in love, and the drama and the pain and the Romeo and Juliet. This feels real). It's really nice reading a story where the pairing isn't about the drama, and the 'woe is me' (although those have their own attraction), but where it's easy and normal and comfortable.

Thanks for sharing.

Tals
Comments from author:
*hugs* Thanks Tals.

I originally wrote this in about an hour and the lack of drama, and simpleness of their relationship is the reason why. I always thought Buffy deserved a strong man outside her supernatural world to be with. Angel was always going to be a disaster, Spike, well, lets not go there, and Riley wasn't strong (IMHO) for her. Charlie was perfect. Mature, quiet, real and happy to live in denial. :D
Review By [tals] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from bubble
Review:
I love this you should continue to show what happens when she meet's bella and the cullens. Well done this is amazing.
bubble
XxXx
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [bubble] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from thegame
Review:
I really enjoyed this story. Do you think she would notice the Cullens before or after Bella meets them.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I actually think it depends on whether or not Charlie gets hurt in the line of duty after she moves in. However, I can certainly say that her presence in the Swan house would certainly change things for Edward. I think Edward would certainly think twice before pursuing Bella mainly because Buffy is living proof that relationships between vampires and humans don't work. All Edward would have to do is see her relationships with Angel and Spike to see the truth.
Review By [thegame] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from spk
Review:
Very sweet one-shot. I could so see Buffy reacting exactly like this. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [spk] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from Greywizard
Review:
My only complaint is that Edward is still apparently semi-alive (or however it is you wish to describe him), but I do enjoy that Buffy is getting the 'happily ever after' she so desperately wants, needs and deserves.

My only other comment is that vampires should only sparkle when you're using gasoline and road flares on them. ;-)
Comments from author:
LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from angrymonkey
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Cute storey, well written, would kind of like to see a sequel. I can just imagine a scene where Buffy walks in on Edward while he's wathcing Bella sleep (I always thought those scenes in the books were really creepy).
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I can just imagine how Buffy would react. Edward would be a in a world of trouble (especially since she's living a normal life now).

Of course, being the responsible step-mum, she'd have to call Carlisle and Esme for a bit of a chat. :D
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Then She Lived" from fairjuno
Review:
I really liked this sweet little one shot. Hope you post a sequel!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [fairjuno] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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