You know, this would be right around the 'cartoon cartoon' era for cartoon network. Maybe Dexter will lend a giant robot to fight the mayor, or the powerpuff girls will help with Adam, or, dare I say it? Samurai Jack versus Glorificus? Keep up the good work.
Review By [CameronYoung] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Very goos work on the story, I hope you will be posting more soon.
-Any pairings in this?
Edit: Didn't this used to be part of "The Blue Fairy"?
Comments from author:
I hope to post more soon, too.
Pairings...um. Well, I like to keep things canon as long as possible when I mess with the fabric of the universe, so the doomed Xander/Anya pairing must happen. After that, given how men always 'marry their mothers,' it's still a toss-up for me between Cordelia and Faith...eh, probably Faith. Unless you throw toons into the mix, then it could be...Demona (demon magnet) or Lola Bunny (rabbit magnet), hmm. ...And then there's the Oxnard factor. Let's just say it's complicated and I'm working on it?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It wouldn't by any chance be The Merry-Go Round Broke Down, would it? LOL
I find this an interesting if short tale. I'd beg for longer chapters, but perhaps its special brand of sanity (or In-Sanity) wouldn't exactly fit in the longer chapter setting.
Anyway, good job on this and I look forward to chapter two. I reserve the right to rate the tale when I have more to go on. Though I suspect high marks are a definite.
Review By [Sithicus] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Not Rated
I'm am so very pleased that you haven't abandoned this story to the cold reaches of cyberspace; even if you're only reorganizing it, that means you might write more that much sooner... or so I choose to believe! *Gives you the puppy eyes*
I like these bits you've given us so far even more every time I read them! It just makes so much SENSE! Of course Xander has to be a toon! No wonder Jessica retreated into her bottle (The loss of so much! Her love, her whole dimension!). You've really made me think about things from both 'BtVS' and the 'WFRR?' universes in whole new ways. I'm looking forward to seeing Lorne, and finding out what our favorite anagogic demon has to say about Jess and Xan's future! :D
As to the song Jessica will sing? I would like to throw my hat into the ring with a guess for "Smile, Darn Ya, Smile." It's a very happy and jaunty tune, but I could easily picture it being jazzily slowed down to be sung in an ironic style; Jessica juxtaposing the lyrics of the song against the sad irony that this "whole world" ISN'T "a great world after all"... or at least it hasn't been for her so far. Then again, I could just be making stuff up off the top of my head. Maybe?
Anywho, keep up the great work, and hope to see more soon! ;)
Review By [Chickalupe] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Not Rated
This is wonderful! I can just see Jessica Rabbit singing in that bar. "Who Framed Roger Rabbit?" was the first PG-13 movie that I ever saw, and I throughly enjoyed it. I am looking forward to the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]