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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from sdavidm
Review:
Good setup, but the last chapter was just a huge brain dump that makes it feel a bit rushed.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [29 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Difdi
Review:
When visualizing the Powers that Be, I usually think of a few rows of seating, like a jury box, with devils, Dracula, assorted historical figures (Hitler, Stalin, etc) and so forth, all wearing white baseball caps that have "Good Guy" stenciled on them...
Review By [Difdi] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Berserkerzeroone
Review:
I really enjoyed this story and found it odd and funny and thought provoking.

BUT...

You seriously need to write either a sequel or alternate choice stories, yanno, one where he works at the SGC and all the training and missions, one for the hunters and one where he goes to college and meets a nice girl and they fall in love etc...
Review By [Berserkerzeroone] • Date [23 Sep 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Obsidian
Review:
Pretty good story. thanks.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [9 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from breve
Review:
interesting story.
i'm not sure i agree with how the scoobies treat xander here.
although the high school years, maybe, in later seasons it was a bit better.
Review By [breve] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Great story!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from jujukittychick
Review:
awesome story, loved it :D poor carter's gonna have a melt down though, loved teh tweezers in the electrical socket thing too. and david lmao, he's going into geek overload. great job with this!
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jujukittychick
Review:
*giggles* "Jack sighed. "I kind of figured that when he started to glow,"" poor jack, always winding up in the med bay and quarantined, at least it wasn't his fault this time lol
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Oxnate
Review:
Very funny. Starting with your unique disclaimers. Nice that you added some style to that boring stuff. Although, wouldn't the vamp have dusted sitting exposed like that for a week?

I vote for new beginning.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from McGurrin
Review:
I like it and hope a sequel comes.
Review By [McGurrin] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Two words and no that was not them. Oh you want the words? PLEASE CONTINUE! Very well written. I believe that Willow WOULD do something that dumb.
Comments from author:
I am thinking about writing a sequel to show what happened in Sunnydale afterwards but it won't be anytime soon. Real life has been very busy right now. Hoping it calms down in August but I'm not holding my breath.

I did give permission to someone to play in this universe as long as they don't go to Sunnydale. Not sure if they're really going to write anything or not
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from janeaverage
Review:
Gorgeous. I know the Muses are fickle but... *sends you Muse!cookies* ;)
Review By [janeaverage] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from neovente
Review:
I love this story thank you for writing it! will there be more/another? thank you. neovente(at)gmail(dot)com
Review By [neovente] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Darkstrider
Review:
I like it, shame it's not continued further! Great stuff.
Review By [Darkstrider] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from WanderingSoul
Review:
---Consider a sequel. I can see this going far . . . so far as to involve a shitload of slayers meeting the super-Zeppo!
Review By [WanderingSoul] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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