Interesting story so far!

I like how this story is shaping up so far! I can't wait for more chapters to come out. For a moment, I thought that Willow was just going to be ejected into the Gate Room through the Stargate. ^_^ I'll be keeping an eye out for more on this one.

d'oh!

You should read through the chapters and fix your grammar and spelling errors.

Higher plans and mysterious notes from what may be the Ancients, eh?

We may not have much info yet, but your plot continues to intrigue me, I have to admit...

Much too perfunctory, Stargate command is at war with powerful aliens with superior technology and who are divinely out to get them and they should be pretty suspicious of any mysterious messages that arrive by unknown means and unknown sources. At the very least they would send a MALP and probably a UAV, perhaps consult with their allies as the the nature of the tech that was behind the message.
Remember they know nothing of Willow. I think your story would be better for a little more work.

The MALP! I knew I forgot something. I will go back and fix that! Thanks! :D

Interesting start, can't wait to see what happens next.

Interesting start

I have to admit I have never seen one of these portal stories done with Willow falling through. I am curious as to how it will turn out.

one wonders if Glory made it to her own dimension or also ended up in the stargate-verse... that'd be kind of sad. Meanwhile at least this is 5th year willow, so she'll be very powerful.
Next question, does Willow 'come out' of the 'gate in Cheyenne Mountain, or on another planet? If another, imagine the funny--SG-1 does the whole 'we come in peace!' thing, not realizing she isn't a native...

A dramatic start, I have to admit; should be interesting to see how Willow comes through something like THIS....

cool