Good story so far. Could you make it a Buffy\Ziva femslash story?
Comments from author:
Thank you. But I'm afraid you're in for a disappointment if you're looking for it to turn into Buffy/Ziva, as it's definitely not going in that direction.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Yay!! So glad to hear there will be more. Fantastic and funny start!! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! The more will likely not appear until September sometime- I'm all about Fic A Day right now, which means I'm all over the place, and often as surprised as anyone else by where the muse takes me.
Oh, I am so glad to hear that you have plans to continue this :-) I'm definitely looking forward to it and will track this story to patiently (or not so patiently...) wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm not sure if the main story will be added to this one, or posted as its own story- I'm leaning toward the latter because otherwise I'd have to Tarantino it back a bit and doing several chapters' worth of flashback could get confusing. But I will add a note or something here either way.
Review By [Alyssara] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Great little fic. Poor Tony, caught between a rock and a hard place. If Gibbs doesn't get him, probably the Slayer will!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Gibbs would definitely be the one to worry about- Buffy's hardly going to be fussed about some harmless flirting, especially if Dawn didn't mind.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Snicker. Very evil. And Tony pretty much deserves what he gets for being unprofessional.
Comments from author:
Thanks! But Tony really wasn't being unprofessional, he was just being Tony. He flirts with most women, and it's generally harmless. The only difference is that most women don't turn out to have a connection to Gibbs...
Review By [Sandi] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Hehe. I really like the start of this, and I for one like that your muse decided to take this story on. I can't wait to see what Gibbs does to DiNozzo when he finds out what he did.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Don't know how soon I'll be posting the rest of it, cause I do want to finish up Sam's Girls first, but this one sort of took over my brain this weekend.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
The only chance Tony has of staying alive is if Dawn finds out about Gibbs overprotective daddy instincts. Can't you just see Dawn getting upset at Gibbs for interfering with her love life? Wouldn't that be fun to write?
Comments from author:
I think Dawn has bigger things on her mind, what with Buffy being Gibbs' not-so-dead daughter, but I think once she realizes, she'll take pity on Tony and save him...
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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