Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from DragonBard
This is an interesting story, but it really has a problem I think.
That problem is that Xander isn't being 'Xander.'
Xander is a joker, always making quips. You can do that while still playing the warrior character.
Look at Jack O'Neil from the Stargate: SG-1 series. That would be a perfect way to play Xander. A bit less grizzled, but just as much a veteran of combat.
Review By [DragonBard
] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DragonBard
Didn't Giles 'try' to go with her (thus not abandoning her) and she knocked him out?
Review By [DragonBard
] • Date [8 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from LostDragon
This needs to be worked on. You have left us hanging and that is just not polite. Please consider adding to this story?
Review By [LostDragon
] • Date [23 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from BlueSkywalker
Please this is very good. Please may we have more.
Review By [BlueSkywalker
] • Date [12 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Kindleflame
Are you still alive? Is this story dead on arrival? I was wondering.
Review By [Kindleflame
] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Silver
I have re-read this story for about the 4th time.. always hoping that if it were not updated, than at least there would be an author's note. I love this and there is so much that could be done with this. Two of your other stories I was tracking, Angel's Will & Unspeakable, you had said, in a response to a review, that they would not be continued. I was very disappointed in that, but I thank you for at least outright stating they would not be continued. A pet peeve of mine is that many authors just up and either abandon a fic or decide they cannot or will not be able to write anymore, and it's just left there with no explanation.
I just adore this fic and would like to know if you have plans for EVER getting back to it... or any of your other stories on this site. I am very interested to see how the changes to the school go, & what else s to happen in the future... Dumbles causing issues, Snape, and X & Faith's wedding. You had responded to a prior review that you haven't written fanfic since 2012, but there are 2 new stories out that you just did this year... If you are not going update any of the stories updated/posted prior to 2012, could you let me know? As much as I adore your work, there is no point in keeping your fics on my tracking list if they are never going to be updated. Thanks for the many good reads and I hope you update some of these soon. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
thank you for your review.
to the two stories of 2013...they where actually written in dec 2012...i just didn't post them then :)
I plan to add more to my fics, but each time i tried to sit down and write something this year i pulled a huge blank. No clue why and I hope that will disappear soon. I will reread this here myself soon and hopefully i then can write more to it.
To the two abandoned stories...they where both tries from me that weren't received very well and so i decided to scrap them....
Review By [Silver
] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from leb
this is a great series, I hope you write more soon
Review By [leb
] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from tchizek
Man I just reread this and wow what a great story/series!
I love the bit at the end with cleaning up Hogwarts!
I do wish you could find time to continue it...
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [25 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Genuka
Review By [Genuka
] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from SpacedCadet
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from CastorandPollux
Excellent....you have to finish this it's brilliant.
Review By [CastorandPollux
] • Date [23 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from WillowPiper
This is a bloody brilliant story please tell me your not going to leave it like this...
Comments from author:
I must confess I haven't written anything fanfic related since Dec 2012 and atm it doesn't seem that will change soon.
Review By [WillowPiper
] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from musumenosuoh
very cool so far! please come back to this!
Review By [musumenosuoh
] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from nerfherder
You will want to remove him as head of house as he has allowed the continuing hazing of Luna. Will he have time to teach?
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from moringstar
Can't wait for the next update
Review By [moringstar
] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated