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Review of chapter "A Day Off or An Off Day?" from Starfall
Review:
Hope you decide to keep going with this story
Review By [Starfall] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Day Off or An Off Day?" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Hoping that there's a chance of an update? Plz?!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Day Off or An Off Day?" from divaslayer
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Interesting story so far, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Day Off or An Off Day?" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Go Jesse! Go Xander!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [27 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Day Off or An Off Day?" from BerserkerNW
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Good story so far. Never watched CSI:Miami, but it sounds like this guy deserves whatever Xander and Jesse can dish. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [15 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Author's Note: SUGGESTION BOX" from Maeven
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similar to piping in music only he can hear, they could pull a Patrick Swayze (from the movie "Ghost") and SING really annoying songs, out of tune, like "I'm Henry the eighth, I am...", that disgusting "Gopher Guts" camp song, and oooooo! "The song that never ends!"

that last one would be especially diabolical...if Jesse and Xander take turns, they could sing it for days, then stop for about an hour..let Stetler feel the sweet relief ...and then start up again and make Stetler break down and cry like a baby *evil grin*
Review By [Maeven] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Note: SUGGESTION BOX" from WolfWriter
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I'm not familiar with the character or the series, but he sounds like an asshole in dire need of a good kick in the ghoolies.

Lemme see....Does he have a private bathroom? Xander and Jesse could make the toilet flush for no reason...for four or five hours straight.....for three solid days.

Or....make embarrassing bodily noises when Stetler is in Horatio's presence. Nothing more embarrassing than cutting loud farts in front of the person you despise....especially loud stinky farts.

Or...have his computer send an email to Horatio declaring his undying love for him, as well as copies to Internal Affairs Department, everyone in the building, his mother, etc.

Or...have all of his tires, including the spare go flat for no reason, just when he's about to go out on a case.
Comments from author:
Oh, you nailed Stetler perfectly, m'dear! He's an asshole of the highest caliber, and I wished the entire time I was watching the show that someone would put him in his place. I guess this is me making that happen.

I love your ideas, too. Especially the farting one! I think I'm gonna have to use that one, at least. And I might work the others in as well, in some form, somewhere along the line.

Thank you so much for your input, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :D
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Note: SUGGESTION BOX" from Izabela
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The Ghost Powers could include changes in appearance. Only Stetler sees Xander and Jesse, who look like different people and behave strangely, or are dressed in leather or spandex. Stetler accuses all of a nervous breakdown or MPD and directs the entire Lab to a psychiatrist. He could end up with a psychiatrist treating his obsession at the behest of Chief.
Comments from author:
That's a good idea, one I hadn't actually considered before. I guess I'll have to think it over, see if I can use it. Thanks!
Review By [Izabela] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Author's Note: SUGGESTION BOX" from stuartpcat
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one way to mess with him would be if they could figure out some way to have music piped into his office that only plays those really annoying songs over and over like barny or its a small world or even one of those pop songs that the more you hear it the more irritating it gets but at a soft volume so he has no real reason to complain.

and so far its a great story
Comments from author:
Ooooh...I like that idea! And maybe someone will come into his office and he'll be all "do you hear that music?" and they'll be all "uh, WTF? there's no music" 'cause Jesse and Xan turn it off when anyone else comes in...yeah. I like that. Thanks!

And I'm glad you like the story so far!
Review By [stuartpcat] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tricks of the Trade" from goldenspringtime
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Very nice ghost training :) I can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hope to have the next bit up soon.
Review By [goldenspringtime] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tricks of the Trade" from slmncpm
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glad to see you are continuing this. *hands you scones*
Comments from author:
*munches on the scones*

Mmmmm...thanks! :D
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tricks of the Trade" from eriktheviking
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Well written demented fun.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad everyone's enjoying the crazy, and hope you like what's to come.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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