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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Oh my. I absolutely ADORED this. It was beautifully written and you picked perfect parts of the books to show character/relationship development. Congratulations - it's a great piece.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AtotheM
Review:
Totally not a Twilight fan, but this was a well done piece. Buffy works well as an oddball Cullen. And I am way happier with her being with Jacob than Renesme.

(I'm sick while I'm reading this, so maybe that works with you having been sick when you posted it ;) )
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChloeBlack
Review:
Loved it! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [ChloeBlack] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from starshinedown
Review:
This isn't what I was expecting, and I'm glad for that. An interesting take on Buffy as a Cullen--thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. It's always nice to be surprising :)
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JayN
Review:
The flow is quite nice in this story, but it leaves a bitter aftertaste; Edward says that she only wants the heat, the attraction but based on Buffy's character, that couldn't be further from the truth.

Every relationship she's been in, she expected it to last, she wanted it to last and she attempted to make each and everyone of them last. With what Edward says, I can't help but feel that he's degrading her and the same basically applies with Jacob. She gives all of herself to these men but at the end of the day, she knows that they'll leave. It's powerful realization for one such as her; even in death, she's the Chosen "One," and she probably will continue to stand alone.

-JN
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. It's unfortunate that Edward came across as degrading, I'll go back and look at the later and see if I can say it more clearly. I meant his speech only that he didn't really understand it. Heat, in the story, was used literally, not as a synonym for passion (which I should probably make clearer as well). Vampire Buffy is slightly different from slayer Buffy in a relationship. Ideally, yes, she would want a lasting relationship, but since she is looking for someone warm, i.e. not a vampire who will live forever, she goes into it knowing it isn't going to last. So the ending had to be at least a little bit bitter.
Review By [JayN] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Keshkreature
Review:
Wow, I loved it! Very poignant. I loved her being there for Bella when Edward ran away, and being what Jacob needed. Her dance with Emmit after saving Leah. Standing up for Bree even when she knew she wouldn't win just showed that it was really still Buffy in there too. Very cool. I just wish that Buffy had a little happier of an ending. Not saying that Jacob shouldn't have his Nessie, but it breaks my heart seeing her so blue at the end.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Buffy isn't too too blue at the end. She knew it was coming, if not as soon as it did. And she's tough. She'll go on.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Oh wow. I love this, please don't take this down.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad for the reassurance. I'm still going to think on it for a few days, but the way it stands now, I don't think I'll take it down.
Review By [twlight] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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