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Review of chapter "Part 3 : Shade Hills" from gaulty
Review:
interesting chapter, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [28 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3 : Shade Hills" from ora
Review:
Very interesting.
Review By [ora] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3 : Shade Hills" from Alberic
Review:
It's interesting, if slow. Still waiting for the crossover - I'm guessing Max had other children, some of which work or are going to work at NCIS OSP. Even money on the family relation being G or Kensi, with the dark horse Hetty (friend, lover, sibling, cousin, etc.) bringing up the rear. Are you adjusting the time so Xander and Buffy crew are still teens when show is on, or are we going to see the NCIS:LA crew before the show? G is probably in his early twenties at this point, Kensi in her teens, Hetty...unchanged.

update when you can, and keep up the good work. This is an underused crossover.
Comments from author:
It's deliberately slow because well... I want to focus on the character interaction and not just rattle dialog after dialog, which kind of explains my progress.

As for your guess... It's something along those lines. Max didn't have any additional kids - I already added Tory, but she plays a different role in the Harris's interaction. I'm keeping the timeline somewhat, so this will be early '00s for both shows. It's, primarily, the first story in a series of stories where the crossover will be more pronounced. As to when the crossover will appear... It will be a while. Like I said, I want to focus on the characters and Xander in particular. And not in the way most Xander-centric fanfics do.

Anyhow, thanks for the review.
Review By [Alberic] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3 : Shade Hills" from MBB
Review:
I'm not entirely sure where the story is going, I can't imagine how the crossover fits in (but then I only watched the first episode of that show).

But i'm really liking the Buffy Xander dynamics. Even if it's not shippy, its glad to read them get along.
Comments from author:
The crossover will show its first hints right after the funeral. Before that happens, other stuff needs to happen first.

And thanks, I wasn't too sure about my portrayal of Buffy - she kind of wrote herself into a more prominent role by appearing at the end of the second chapter. But respect for the characters is something I think important.
Review By [MBB] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3 : Shade Hills" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and detailed set-up.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2 : A Call To Apathy" from Gideon
Review:
Good advice from Buffy there. A car is not a home!
Comments from author:
Uhu :-) It's pure logic. Xander just doesn't always follow it.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2 : A Call To Apathy" from atticus
Review:
Promising. I'm enjoying your ground work and will wait patiently for the pay off. Keep it coming.
Comments from author:
Hmm... Thanks. Initially your review inspired me to start on the third chapter, but then my seven year old nephew woke up. But I'll get there this week :-)
Review By [atticus] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2 : A Call To Apathy" from gaulty
Review:
good start, wonders what will happen next, byes
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [gaulty] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2 : A Call To Apathy" from wackyninja
Review:
ok, so far I'm curious to see where this goes next. good start, though.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's... Well, for me it's heading to an often treaded path in fiction; I just haven't seen it in a fanfic yet. But I do hope I won't disappoint.
Review By [wackyninja] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2 : A Call To Apathy" from Eureka
Review:
Pretty good for a start. Hope to learn what is waiting Xander when he goes to do the funeral thing.
Comments from author:
Hmm... Well, all I will see at this point in time is that this story is character oriented. Depending on my motivation, a sequel story will contain more action. I can't however justify that story's Xander without this maturation period. Others have taken a shortcut by altering the Halloween episode, but I find myself incapable of following that route. Insight and acceptance of oneself takes time and circumstances to develop, thus this what if.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2 : A Call To Apathy" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written depressing scene setter.
Comments from author:
Heh, thanks. Yeah, this story will be a little darker than your usual fanfic. Well, darker... More realistic.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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