Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
MajinJohnTitorReview:
Nice story mate. You should write more of it!
Comments from author:
thank you for reviewing. i'm afraid the story is completed. it was really just something that came to me while watching the movie. but i'd be happy to see anyone taking it over and showing the beginning of it - how xander got to lyra's world and all that.
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MajinJohnTitor] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
calliopesolReview:
lovely -- I'm a huge fan of His Dark Materials, and I think you blended Xander into that world rather seamlessly.
Comments from author:
thank you. i'm really glad you liked it.
Review By [
calliopesol] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Not Rated