Nice work, you have captured quite well the loneliness of forever in just a few words. And its nice that River is speaking for her, it gives Buffy an immediate connection to the crew, even though it isn't a connection they will all be happy about.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Excellent little gem. Buffy being the last to leave Earth is major creepy. If all the other Scoobies are gone, I can see why Buffy is no longer perky. Will there be more to your story?
Comments from author:
Thanks! There may be more, but I make no promises as to when.
I like the story so far and hope you continue and can't wait also for your update "sam's girls". Looking forward to both update...Are you going to be doing some flashbacks on why Buffy is still alive and where are her scooby friends? will she be hostile toward Mal and Jasmine co'z u know they were they were the big bad in her world? or ur just going to just make it as they never met before? anywaz can't wait to see your next update.