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Review of chapter "Mercy" from Stationary
Review:
eagerly waiting for the next installment in this 'verse!
Review By [Stationary] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercy" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on this series of fics, I look forward to reading the next one.

-Why do these one shots and not a multi-chapter story though?
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review! There is another one in the works, however I'm not sure when it will be posted.

The reason they're one-shots is purely logistical. I don't have time to update frequently due to work/uni/rl. So I post one-shots. I do have a multi-part fic in the works, however I won't post it until it's finished. Well, until I change my mind and decide to post. :D
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercy" from shakeval
Review:
too mushy
that isn't Xander, definitely OOC to an extreme
it would have been more then likely that willow would have come to investigate almost immediately, since someone was doing something to xander.
whether or not the 'cold ones' if you want to put it that way can or can't be killed xander most certainly wouldn't be staying around, he would have moved on with his team, leah in tow or not.
the chapters were too short
character development was minimal to non existent
unfortunately, any potential this may have had seems to have been squandered.
a re-write is suggested, with some character development and if xander is going to be so out of character there should be a reason for that.
Comments from author:
I respectfully disagree with the suggestion of OCC characterisation of Xander and the suggestion of the rewrite, I'm absolutely happy with the series as it is and have no plans to change or alter it in anyway, but I thank you for your feedback.
Review By [shakeval] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercy" from thesithspawn
Review:
Too mushy for my taste especially since you haven't developed Leah much in the other fics.
Still want to see what happens next with them.
Review By [thesithspawn] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercy" from Gideon
Review:
Your fic shows very well how it is often the ones closest to us that can hurt us the most :(
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercy" from Elleria
Review:
Love this story, love this 'verse.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercy" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercy" from bookworm
Review:
Here you are then. Hope it works for you. :-) If you'd like anything else, feel free to let me know.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v504/scootmaster_9/Fish-tacos-1.jpg
Comments from author:
Absolutely awesome. Thank you so so much! I'm going to have to work out how to link it after I finish my fic for the day.

Again, thank you!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercy" from tals
Review:
That is so utterly messed up and deeply tragic... How Meyer could consider this a romantic notion is beyond me. Great writing as always. Thanks for sharing.

Tals
Comments from author:
That pretty much sums up the situation. So very, very mixed up.

To be honest, I don't think Meyers put too much thought into the imprinting... or Bella for that matter. She had a tendency to gloss over the real issues.

It's why I liked Leah so much, she was one of the few real characters in the books.
Review By [tals] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercy" from bookworm
Review:
I know very little about Twilight, but this sub-universe intrigues me. Also, it's been a while since I actually made something, but your request for art inspired me to spend far too long hunting up pictures, and thence to make a banner for the first story. Should I just paste the link in here somewhere, or do you have specific requests?
Comments from author:
Paste the link here! Anything will be appreciated and thank you. No requests. I'd be happy with anything.

I always get such a thrill when people say they dislike/don't read Twilight but give the fic a go anyway. Thank you.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercy" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
So sad but true to the verse!
Comments from author:
Yes, poor, poor Leah.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercy" from angrymonkey
Review:
That is probably the best expression of how I imagine Leah would react to an imprint I have seen in fanfiction. I will never understand why Stephanie Meyers came up with such a horrifying method of breeding for the werewolves... and then portrayed it as something romantic!
Comments from author:
Thank you. To me imprinting is such a horrible notion, not at all romantic.

That's not to say that they're both going to be miserable for the rest of their lives, but it's certainly not going to be instant happiness.
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercy" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful, whish it was a bit longer but it works at this length.
Review By [twlight] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercy" from MajinJohnTitor
Review:
Very profound mate. You definitely have to write a follow-up. Also, why did you put it was Andrew-centered??
Comments from author:
Thank you! There will be a follow up, although the one I'm probably going to post tonight won't be a direct one from this but more like a glimpse at Leah and Xander together.

The category was just a mistake I made in my haste to get to bed last night.
Review By [MajinJohnTitor] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercy" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
Love it. My rabid Embry love (and my resolute belief that he's gay) has be not loving the previous one so much, although I LOVE the idea of Xander as the next generation of Giles This one I adore. I love how you get in Leah's head. I'd love more of these.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! There will be more.

Embry is brilliant isn't he? In retrospect, I should have gone with Quil.
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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