Review of chapter "Father and Son" from Blackett
Oooh. So sweet of him to drop by. Not the usual behavior for one of the Greek gods. Somehow he was one of my favorite gods while I was reading about the Greek myths and legends during childhood.
Review By [Blackett
] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Father and Son" from Luna
ornate metal walking stick--- nice description!
A few more looked incredibly nervous and gave him deep bows.----- the nervous part makes sense but deep bows? In SunnyD? Seems weird…
Really short…and you’d think that H would forge Xander a new mechanical eye!
Review By [Luna
] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Father and Son" from JediKnight
Hoping to read more soon.
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Father and Son" from Vilkath
eh not a bad idea but.. 134 words including disclaimer is not a story imo.
Comments from author:
It is a ficlet. a drabble. it was never intended to be a story.
Review By [Vilkath
] • Date [9 Aug 10] • Not Rated