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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
Review:
OK. This story CRIES out to be completed! I mean, I can almost feel either Dooku or Palpatine, along with the First, out there, wanting to get a hold of either Summers sister or both, and turn them away from their calling. And that would not be good for the universe.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
So, the First got mixed up in the move to stop the Dimensions from collapsing with Dawn's jump and Buffy's sacrifice. Now that they are in the Star Wars universe, its time to start explaining things to the Jedi, to stop both Palpatine AND the First from getting any headway!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
If what I read is right, then The First is going to have to go BACK to the fall of Sunnydale and see if it can figure out a way to kill Buffy before she passes the Slayer instinct onto those who would become Jedi. If son, Then its BATTLE MODE time!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from deathgeonous
Review:
And this one was interesting. Well, thanks for what you wrote of it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from bradsan
Review:
good start enough to make me curious how it will go further. Dawns power is the key and the magic that it holds and Buffy is the Slayer, her own power(inner strenght) and the magic that all Slayers have. Buffy can guard her power so if I'm right Buffy is more power full than they can detect on her am I right. It has to be otherwise Padma would never called her. Dawn never learned to guard her power so is easier to read. maybe Buffy should teach Dawn how to guard herself.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from skychan
Review:
A bit short and sweet, I don't think I can really comment on this story until seeing a bit more of it.
Comments from author:
I'll try and not keep you waiting as long.
Review By [skychan] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Joe B has written a much welcomed update that I enjoyed (a lot)!! I'm eager to see if Buffy and Dawn might change their minds (I suspect Dawn might choose yes ahead of Buffy).
Comments from author:
You might be right.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [16 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
For the balance, Buffy cares not
This disturbs the Jedi so
But she'll knock out the Sith's snot
And maybe good will grow.

(Sorry for the gross rhyme.)
Comments from author:
You're forgiven, thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Valkyrie
Review:
Oh balls.
I didn't know the day.
Maybe I should stall.
To figure out what to say.
I read it. I liked it.
It wasn't a snore.
It's fantastic, a real hit.
So I'd like to read more.
Comments from author:
As soon as I'm able.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from vatisay
Review:
Not bad so far, i like to see a sparring session with Buffy against a jedi (Buffy must kick ass lol) anyways hopefully u have something more on this.
Comments from author:
There will be more, you'll get your wish next chapter.
Review By [vatisay] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Gideon
Review:
Looks like Buffy from season 5 is not too keen on joining the Jedi either :) I hope she keeps their contact details though for when she does need some new friends. Now all she needs to do is recognise the Sith when they come for her and Dawn. Can she sense Palpatine when all the Jedi could not?
Comments from author:
She might not be able to sense him, but Palpy always reminded me kind of the Mayor, so she might spot that.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from deathgeonous
Review:
Interesting. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
You're welcome.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
Loved it!
I can't wait when they find out they can't have any attachments.
Buffy's gonna freak with the no boys rule.
Update soon, yeah?
Comments from author:
Yeah, I can't see her being overly happy about that.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from WolfWriter
Review:
I foresee headaches galore for everyone involved.

It should be funny as all heck to read!
Comments from author:
Yeah, you're right there.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from BrownFinderth
Review:
So, why were Buffy and Dawn transported? What will happen to them?? Unfortunately, this story was not continued, though I wish it were!!
Comments from author:
You got your wish, hope you enjoyed it.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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