Nice take on how Dawn might react to being dead. I thought you did a good job on keeping everyone in character, and I love the Buffyverse characters' pragmatic/practical outlook on the usual supernatural craziness. Finally, although this work feels complete in itself, I would be delighted if you ever did decide to return to this universe.
Edit: This was actually a respectably sized review that actually said something when I wrote it; I don't know what happened. Sorry.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [15 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Oh my, this was completely and utterly brilliant! I really LOVE this plot! It's just so original and full of awesomeness! I love the baby!Dawn Winchester idea, and Dean's daughter at that. I wonder how Sam would react?
I also really loved the appearance of Doyle and how he was the messenger for the PTB.
All around fabulous story! Any chance of a sequel?
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Please tell me you have more planned for this verse! I love this, love the idea, the writing, the whole round thing, so pretty pretty please? Gives me thoughts of writing Dawn Winchester things...
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]