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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written low key save.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwistingXan
Review:
haha.. i would love to see more from this universe.. but seriously i love the clothes xander wore and neal's observations of them.. so in character.. hehe..
Review By [TwistingXan] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Any chance of a follow-up story?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful! I love the whole idea. I hope that you write more White Collar/BTVS crossovers. Again I love this story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Loved the idea, the bits of Neal and Burke seem to work, Xander is a bit off.

Granted this is him representing the IWC and interacting with the FBI, and it has been a few years, but there isn't really anything that makes this man Xander, and not Robin Wood or someone else. Maybe if it had been just a bit longer, more flavor would have come through.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from missinglink
Review:
Nice, neat and tidy. About ideal as story blurbs go, but there was one thing that held it back. The flavor/color of Xander wasn't really felt. Now arguement could be made that Xander either a)matured or b)was respecting whom he was dealing with, but either thru his uncanny fashion sence, his bad but laughable jokes or his trademark half grin there needed to be more to identify him as Xander and not just a goon in Xander appearance.

It's not a big thing, but it keeps it from being succint and ideal in a way that the reader would feel the character more than just passingly glimpse them in the story. Good effort and keep it up. Later.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I believe that seeing his home sink into nothingness would mature him, so that could be a valid excuse, but really I'm just not that great at writing Xander. He's my favorite BTVS character, but I can never get him right. I went back and added a few things: Just a hint of his fashion sense and furthering the conversation near the end. Thanks for taking the time to correct me. I hope I got him a little closer.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great crossover with all involved still maintaining there in-canon character.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silentflux
Review:
This was great - I love the interaction between the characters and the idea for this :) Wonderful job!
Review By [silentflux] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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