Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Nightwing Book II

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Revalations." from Darkcrest
Review:
love the story so far however. hope you continue with it. I feel that dick would know that he needs infrastructure to continue being nightwing even with what he had after Halloween his equipment will start to run out /breakdown over timeand need replaced. Even if he has to build up a company with jenny as the public face to do so to keep his anonymity
Review By [Darkcrest] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revalations." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Sigh, another tale halted in an inappropriate place, i.e. before its time... You've produced a lot of interesting weapons for the story. Don't you think it is time to produce the manufacturer?
Comments from author:
At some point I'll come back to them. But they were left alone because no one was letting me know that they wanted to see more.

Raf
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That was fast." from nemogbr
Review:
Never thought of that one. Good update.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

I'm trying to keep this one as original as possible.

I'm borrowing some ideas for Cordelia from my Rifts Story.

Could you guess which one?

Raf
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Ooh it's green... And it's glowy..." from nemogbr
Review:
Good update.

I think there should be a threesome....bwa hahaha

Looking forward to finding out the new heroes.
Black Canary
Oracle
Huntress
Nightwing...Dick is a bit too obvious, will he change his persona to Batman or perhaps the Grey Ghost?

Will Andrew be joining and becoming the new Oracle, while Willow becomes a new hero?

Who becomes Zatana?
Comments from author:
I don't know about a threesome... But Cordelia will think about it. We'll see how it plays out in the story.

There's several new heroes possible.

Black Canary... I don't see it... Might be possible over time, might not...

Oracle... That's a certainty, just a matter of who, or maybe a shared persona.

Zatana... I see the same thing happening with the Oracle, both Willow and Jenny will share the mantel for this one.

Huntress... Aura?

Dick is Dick.

Angel and Oz... Question and if you have suggestions I would love to hear it.

Giles... He could go in so many directions.

Again I would love to hear your opinion.

Raf
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Ooh it's green... And it's glowy..." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I see a threesome in the future.
Comments from author:
Maybe?

I don't know yet if Dick will go along, but apparently Cordelia is open for experimentation.

Thank you for the review.

Raf
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [21 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
"Why did you say it that way? Is there something wrong with my ass? Giles, could you please check out my ass? Does it look normal to you? It's not swollen or anything? Is it?" asked Buffy.

*snicker*
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed.
Raf
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from nemogbr
Review:
Atlantean Tattoos?

Nice development.
Comments from author:
Hey nemo.

It's good to hear from you again.

Not Atlantean, but similar, and with a darker twist.

Keep an eye for further developement.


Thank you for the review.

Raf
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from Tjack
Review:
Not to be vulgar...but do you mean to tell me that whenever Buffy needs a magical weapon she's just gonna as the saying goes "pull one out of her a$$"?
Comments from author:
uh... no...

Kidding. Jenny will help her with it. And it's not as much of a blessing as you guys think this is.

There's a hook, and a price to pay.

Raf
Review By [Tjack] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from daveykins
Review:
Thank you! I needed a good laugh! :)

Good update once again!
Comments from author:
Thank you.

I`m glad this chapter struck the chord I was looking for.

Raf
Review By [daveykins] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from LostDragon
Review:
ROFLMA, "Giles, what's wrong with my ass, look at it" I love it my sides are still hurting thinking about how fast G-man is going to rub his glassess.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Raf
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from Rune
Review:
Another good chapter, did I read it right when after reading,



Cordelia obeyed. It was the father of her children that the pushy redhead was trying to save.

Buffy felt the same way.


I'm left feeling like Buffy wants to have Dick father a child on her too? Poor guy, chased by two alpha females at the same time.

On the other hand, you left out the chapter that details the wedding of Jenny and Rupert, bad boy.
But you did get them married, even if it was off stage, so you did good!

I'm glad your hand is better and going to be fine. Thanks for the update. :)
Comments from author:
Dick always had a problem with the ladies.

Too attractive and playful for his own good.

Too much to cover. I wanted to jump a bit ahead into the new year. I might get back to it with a flashback or two.

Three more weeks.

Cast came off today.
Review By [Rune] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I see the gang is feeling... playful.
Comments from author:
Less pressure.

With Dick, Cordy and Giles having an edge of their own, Buffy isn't under as much pressure, so she doesn't take it out on the gang like she did if she only had to rely on Angel's occasional help.

Thank you for the review.

I've cleaned it up with Rune's help, and added a bit to chapters 2 and 3.

Raf.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from Rune
Review:
Its a nice update, short but thats fine. The fight is quick and you leave us with a cliffy but the Batman show did that all the time too. I added the original story Nightwing to my recs. That means I like the entire series. We get so few recommendations, just 10 to start and I only have 15 at the moment. I'm new at this site but not to fanfiction. I wonder how many girls will end up chasing Dick? And what Cordy will do about it?
Comments from author:
Thank you for your help and the recommendation.
Cliff Hangers are a part and parcel of the Batman and Buffy story lines.
As for the girls... I'll let the characters themselves decide. This way they'll surprise me as well.

Thanks again.

Raf.
Review By [Rune] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from Rune
Review:
A 10 is only for finished stories.

And if you are doing this on an Ipod then more power to you!

There is nothing wrong with short chapters.

I and any other reviewer worth listening to will tell you better a short chapter than no chapter!
Review By [Rune] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightwing Book II: Sunnydale Knights." from (Recent Donor)tammin
Review:
Welcome Back. This was a nice addition to this series and I look forward to reading the next chapter. We have seen Xander in Gotham; now I am anticipating watching Dick in Sunnydale. Will he be able to fill Xander's role in the group?
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Only time will tell.

Raf.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Page: 1 of 2 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking