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Review of chapter "Chapter 6: The Cullen's" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Why do you have Chapter 6 Edwards pov down twice. Got to fix that. :)
Comments from author:
Will do! Thanks for letting me know. (:
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Buffy and Hospitals Don't Mix" from nightshadowlife
Review:
oh wow!!!!!! Seriously can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Buffy and Hospitals Don't Mix" from scottm
Review:
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Have you started planning for the next part of this fic yet? I didn't want to end it there.
Too bad Buffy had to be turned into a vampire. Any thoughts on how a slayer turned vampire will be different?
Review By [scottm] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Buffy and Hospitals Don't Mix" from scottm
Review:
Good job on this story. Can't wait to read the sequel soon. Enjoyed all the updates this week. Keep up the wonderful writing.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I am glad you liked the story. As for continuing, of course I will. I had already planned that the first time around lol. As for Buffy turning into a vampire, I hadn't really thought about it. Oh well we will just have to see =)
Review By [scottm] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Buffy and Hospitals Don't Mix" from Emeraldfire
Review:
Great story, can't wait till the next chapter!!!! I just have one small bit of constructive criticism. Stop changing points of view in the middle of a chapter, or if you do, warn us. It's a little confusing. Don't take offense please. I mean well.
Comments from author:
Oh I forgot, I will change it asap. thank you for letting me know =)
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Questions and Concerns" from scottm
Review:
Great job on this story. I'm glad you sent us more!
Comments from author:
Thank you! =)

There will be about three more chapters in this story and it's on to the sequel!
Review By [scottm] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Questions and Concerns" from ChloeBlack
Review:
looove it! =) and i'm glad you are continuing on!
Comments from author:
Thank you =) I decided that i would finish it weither people liked it or not. I only have maybe three more chapters left with this one and then it's off to the sequel! I am glad that you are loving the story.
Review By [ChloeBlack] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Family Meeting and the Phone Call" from ChloeBlack
Review:
This is good! A few spelling errors here and there, but hey, we're all human. hehehe Very very good plot line! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! =) I have been working hard to continue working on this story but I don't know where it should go next. If you have any ideas please let me know and I'll give you credit. =) I am trying to find a co-author so spread the word around lol
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Review By [ChloeBlack] • Date [23 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Family Meeting and the Phone Call" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
Awesome!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [27 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: Family Meeting and the Phone Call" from nightshadowlife
Review:
Can't wait to see where you go with the revision!!!!
Comments from author:
OMG! I haven't heard from you in a long while! I hope you liked this chapter, I worked pretty hard on it.

Basically I know where I want this story to go, it's just taking longer than I thought to get there. I had already finished my Dawn's First Light the first time around, But since I had to rewrite it, this redo is taking on a life of it's own. I never really know how my chapters are going to turn out until they are finished, and I like that about this story.
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [17 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: The Cullen's" from Avaiaal
Review:
this chapter seems to be posted twice in the chaper.
lol. otherwise yay!
Comments from author:
I know -sighs- I just didn't know if I wanted to post this chapter or not. In the end I thought I might as well do it. But I am really happy with the chapter that I just posted. Hope you like it better than this one LOL. Enjoy =))
Review By [Avaiaal] • Date [15 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Funerals and Moving to Forks" from (Current Donor)liability
Review:
who's POV is this story in? it seems to go from 1st to 3rd? I found it difficult to follow

Nice idea, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
The main POV in this story is going to be Buffy's, but don't be surprised if it changes from chapter to chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)liability] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Funerals and Moving to Forks" from efwrocks
Review:
Story seems good so far. Hope you update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [efwrocks] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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