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Review of chapter "Learn the Truth" from Harry
Review:
A rather interesting crossover story. Seeing Neal as the son of Dawn and Xander is a interesting idea. And now that Peter knows about what is going on, it will make things a lot easier for the FBI to know in NYC what is a vampire attack, what is a demon attack, and when to strike on a matter that is truly for the FBI to get involved in.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Learn the Truth" from Netchka
Review:
Love the story. Too cool.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Come Home" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Merry Christmas, and to all a good life. Prayers for a update are always included.
Comments from author:
Thank you; Merry Christmas back to you. As for the update, this story is complete, but I hope to add more to the series eventually. Thanks again!
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Learn the Truth" from Misty
Review:
Great idea for an explaination, didn't see that coming. Thank you for a great story
Comments from author:
Thank you for a kind review! ^_^

Glad to surprise someone.
Review By [Misty] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Learn the Truth" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
thank you for a very good read.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Go on a Field Trip" from Xovervore
Review:
To answer your question about 'Richard' - the easiest thing to do is to put story in 'Whole Story' mode, and then do a 'Find'.
I have done this for you - it is in Chapter 2, section headed 'New York, 2010', part headed 'One week later ...', as follows:

The older twin, red-headed TK, broke the silence. "So the gallery's doing well," she announced. "We've sold another of the paintings you had in there when we took over. Oh, and we're thinking about moving to an apartment and opening that top floor as a world exhibit. Uncle Oz and Aunt Faith brought back some amazing Tibetan artwork last Christmas, and Cor and Richard sent over a few shawls and things their neighbors made. They're gorgeous."
Comments from author:
I didn't know that was an option. Thank you for taking the time to do that, and for pointing out where it was found!
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Go on a Field Trip" from morange
Review:
I really want to slap Cruz upside the head. There's something about her that irritates me. meh. Cool chapter, and the designation of 'tourist' made me smile.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I did through most of her screen time; I just never really cared for her as much as Diana. That just seems like something the Scoobies would do.
Review By [morange] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Go on a Field Trip" from eriktheviking
Review:
Always fun to see macho men and their reaction to the 'real' world. Well done and thanks.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take a Call" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
very well done, thank you for the entertaining read.
Comments from author:
Thank you; glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take a Call" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written Neil attempting to avoid the question.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Get Some Answers" from mandac
Review:
love how El knew about what goes bump in the night. good job, can't wait for more.

and I vote to keep following Neal.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying it. Alright, all of you win. Neal's my main guy for the story, no abandoning him! ^_^
Review By [mandac] • Date [23 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Get Some Answers" from Greywizard
Review:
Thought this chapter was very nicely done, and Neal's revelation of the darker side of things was done quite well.

Elizabeth's support and revelation of her own experience also was a nice touch, and I am waiting to see whether Peter abruptly finds Dawn and possibly some of the other Scoobies standing in his living room after he tells her that Neal nearly had his throat sliced open. ;-)

As far as how to handle the next chapter, either a scene showing the Scoobies' take on everything, or a continuation of the current scene would be fine with me, since I'm enjoying this story whichever way you want to present it.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I hadn't thought about having the family show up because of the slit throat. Thanks for the idea... I may have to use that! And I'm glad you liked Elizabeth's minor backstory, and the revelation. Thanks again for the review!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [23 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Get Some Answers" from (Past Donor)wolframhart
Review:
Enjoying the story. In answer to your question, my suggestion is to stay with Neal and Peter's point of view. Most readers know how the Scooby gang will generally react to things, the joy of cross-overs is to see how outsiders react to the supernatural and to the Scooby gang. Just my suggestion, I look forward to reading whichever direction you choose. Keep writing.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I appreciate your taking the time to review! Glad you're enjoying this.
Review By [(Past Donor)wolframhart] • Date [23 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deflect the Questions" from LMiC
Review:
It's a sweet chapter and I love canasta. (I love the hand and foot variety more but who's asking...) I wish you and your muse a speedy recovery and a permanent reconciliation. Muses can be so darned fickle.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I've never played, but I can see that being something June and Moz would both love, and it's less expected than poker. My muse and I are speaking again, and he loved the flowers I sent him. I think we'll be okay. Thanks again!
Review By [LMiC] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deflect the Questions" from morange
Review:
Yay! A new chapter! *gives a big hug*

Poor Peter, Neal is right, he isn't asking the right questions. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [morange] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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