Good story, but there was a 'mouse' I want to know more about - who are the 7 people that Buffy needs to be there to help? Willow, Xander, maybe Giles, Dawn?, Oz?, who else?

I honestly don't remember. It's been so long since I wrote this that I don't really remember any of the stray ideas that were tossed aside.

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Objective: Informing Alexander "Xander" Harris about the Shadow War. Key facts for convincing main subject to join the fight includes threat profiles against subject James "Jesse" McNally and Willow "Wills" Rosenberg.
Succeeding in convincing main subject to join the fight ahead of prophesied schedule would mean an increase in the Primary Objective Mission Success rate by 5.1%.
Note: Including the standing threat the End Scenarios pose against the continued production of Twinkies is estimated to increase mission success rate by 21.78%.

That would work well for a bit of a lead in if I were to continue this.

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I really like what you had done with this. The only thing I could thing to make it better is if there was a sequel to it.

Hmm... I'm not really sure what I would do for a sequel. I'll think about it.

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That was... interesting. Pity you didn't continue it... though it was written like it was meant to be a 1 shot... oh well.

Like many of my oneshots, I might well do a sequel in the future.

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I just reread this story again for fun and the emotional content was fairly appropriate for Cameron. She doesn't really understand emotions even if she is quite good at aping them on occasion. Maybe Buffy's experience here will help her recognise robots in her future!
Also I shudder to think what Faith would think when she arrived in town to find Buffy with Xander and Willow. I don't think she would like being left out!

Well, she doesn't actually know Cameron is a robot, so I don't know...Buffy still thinks she's a special agent. But maybe.

As for reading it for fun, I hope you read it for fun the first time as well. I do hope no one's forcing yourself to read my stuff. That would be torture.

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Wow. Love the plot. Not so much on the execution of Buffy's bisexuality. I mean, I have nothing against her making it with other girls. In fact, I think it's hot. However, you glazed over all of the emotions and interactions that go with seduction, or in this case, self-seduction, of the same sex. All of this is needed to make it believable and not just some adolescent jerk-off fantasy. And the execution of the story was cursory at best. I understand that you had a lot of information to cover in one chapter, but there could have been at least a little more depth. But hey, love the cross-over, and the storyline's great. Can't wait for more!

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Oh, god, please don't think I meant any disrespect by that! "Adolescent jerk-off fantasy" is a phrase so bandied about about my own work that I've grown too comfortable with it, and have forgotten how offensive it can be. My girl pointed that out to me, and I am so sorry for seeming like a jackass! I love where you're going with this story, though! Keep more coming!

I've been experimenting with prose lately, and this was one of them. I agree, the emotions were absent there. I could have used a few more scenes to show how things were progressing, however I initially decided against them because it was from the point of view of an emotionless machine. Looking at it now, I'm not so sure it worked.

I didn't want it to be a jerk-off fantasy, but if that's what people think it came out as, I suppose that's their opinion.

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Loved the shovel, but the idea was to bury him with it afterwards. You stopped too soon! I really hope you do a shovel.

Well, technically, it was "beat to death with a shovel" But Angel was already dead, so the reverse worked as well.

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A well written and very unexpected method of crossover.

Well, it is a time travel story of sorts.

I'm glad you liked it.

YAY! Hit him again with a BIGGER shovel!

Much enjoyed, thank-you.

DaveT.

Shovels are nice.

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Pretty sure it is Connor and not Connors.

Other than that I really liked it. Hope you write some more. :)

Yep, you're not the first one to catch that slip up on my part.

Any sequel will be sometime down the road. For now, I'll just have this until I get some other works in progress finished.

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Complete? No , not complete! I don't want it to be complete!
Oh, well, regardless of my wishes it does make a nice self contained story and both Buffy and Cameron will be busy for the next several years anyway.
I love the thought of Cameron pretending to be a valley girl, like Buffy was pre series. I wonder how Buffy convinced her not to sit near her friends?
Its almost a pity that Cameron tried to reform the council, most of them are not worth saving :P
And I don't think you will be the only person to focus on the 12.9% :)

Yeah, I thought more people would want to have this be longer, but I just couldn't manage to get into another big project like this. I'll think about doing a sequel later when things settle down with my other works. Maybe I should finish some that are just not quite done.

Anyways, thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it, and that 12.9% is definitely better in this case.

I like it.

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Ok now this is interesting. Love to see more.

Maybe some day, but for now it's just going to be a one shot.

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Very well done. One of the better terminator fics I've seen. It would be interesting to see this expanded to explore the full effects of Cameron's involvement, but as a one-shot it works great.

I thought about doing that, but realized I've got too many works in progress open at the moment. I might do a sequel in the future.

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Your story was just "neat"! Nice job with both Buffy and Cameron. I really hope Cam made an improvement in Buffy's future life. I especially was impressed with the idea of Buffy showing her parents her Slayerhood by twisting the steel bar into a pretzel shape. Lol!

I'm glad you liked it, I did try to keep the personalities as close to in character as I could. As for an improvement, I hope so.

The steel bar was just something I thought up. It does make for better belief if you've got proof of your own abilities.

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