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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Nicely done! Very funny. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
For me, it was the way you didn't reveal the logo on the crates. There really was only one thing that it could be. It is, after all, an *extremely* generic name :D

Poor guy. At least Xander and the gang will be happy :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [3 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LordSia
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... Awful. Really, why would you do that to poor Coyote?
And why am I still laughing?
Review By [LordSia] • Date [15 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Gideon
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That was definitely a surprise!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from eriktheviking
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A definite Wile E. moment. Fun update, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!

Never would have guessed it. I was thinking alien of some kind for a minute there.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from calliopesol
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I didn't catch on till I got to the part with the crates. I feel so slow! Excellent story though.
Review By [calliopesol] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Blackdex
Review:
Huh, I did not see that coming.
Review By [Blackdex] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
EXCELLENT Crossover surprise! I was *so* not expecting that!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Mediancat
Review:
Bravo!

I figured it out just before the big reveal -- the complicated blueprint did it for me. Still, nice job of being deceptively accurate.
Review By [Mediancat] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LFW
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Darn funny ending!
Thanks
Great build up
Review By [LFW] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from djhardim
Review:
Very Good. You may find this interesting.

http://www.torinfo.com/justforlaughs/coyote_v_acme.html

Coyote V. Acme
IN THE UNITED STATES DISTRICT COURT,
SOUTHWESTERN DISTRICT, TEMPE, ARIZONA
CASE NO. B19294, JUDGE JOAN KUJAVA, PRESIDING
Wile E. Coyote, Plaintiff
-v.-
Acme Company, Defendant

Ian Frazier, The New Yorker, February 26, 1990, p. 42--43.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from CPTSkip
Review:
Now I understand how WEC paid for all his Acme supplies! As the Tom Smith song "Desert Storm" says, "I could buy General Motors with what I spend on parts." Lovely story even with the sad ending for the Worlds Smartest Coyote. He should have hired a good investment councilor. How much can canned roadrunner cost? Sigh!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from grundy
Review:
Nice!
Review By [grundy] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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