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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from garrycooper
Review:
Great story!!!
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [6 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from DenSorteEngel
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“Ah, then I shall marshal forth the grand resources at my disposal to ensure a quick and hasty rescue of your person.” George stood proud and firm before turning his attention to a curious looking Draco, as he hefted a rolled up newspaper and lightly swatted the blond man atop his head. “Bad Malfoy, bad. Let Harry go.”

LOOOOL
Review By [DenSorteEngel] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from anothergirlfromoz
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I only recently stumbled across your story but I would like to say that it is a wonderful story. I have read it a few times now because it is a realistic interpretation of what could have happened in the HP universe. Your characterisations are realistic, intriguing, and fit to the HP universe, though not what is normally expected for post Dark Hallows Fanfic. Thanks for your imagination and skill in writing.
Review By [anothergirlfromoz] • Date [2 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from cindlemain
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This may be one of my favorite Harry Potter fics to date. I enjoy the way you write the characters, especially Harry. I just kind of stumbled over this one and I'm glad I did. I'm going to go look through the rest of your stories and I do so hope you write more in this little universay, it would be very enjoyable
Review By [cindlemain] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from iChaos
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Well, that was without a doubt one of the most gloriously wicked Harry Potter fics that I have seen yet. At first glance, the plot was twisted and the characters warped nearly beyond recognition. Even so, I thoroughly enjoyed the Machiavellian humor of it all, and found it rather simple to accept that the characters might behave just as you presented them given the circumstances. Still, I must admit, this one had me guessing right up to the last moment, and left me wanting more while at the same time almost cringing at the prospect.

With a little more polishing of the text, resolution of a few gaping plot holes (the idea that Harry & Draco from this fic could become teachers at Hogwarts is a fic in of itself) and slightly more variety in the mannerisms of each character (how many times can they tap their finger or fold their arms across their torso in each scene?) - this fic could be a solid ten as far as I'm concerned.
Review By [iChaos] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Grove
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Love this story!!!
Review By [Grove] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Grove
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This was a GREAT story! I absolutely loved it!
Review By [Grove] • Date [18 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Elleria
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Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Teucrian
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Awesome story! Very well written, and good work with your characterization, as well.
Review By [Teucrian] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from mimijikazananyi
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That was fantastic! ^_^
Review By [mimijikazananyi] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from HarmMarie
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Loved this. You do excellent banter.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [4 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Ansku
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Simply awesome :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from emeraldisle
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This was a great story :) I really enjoyed how you did the characters. I laughed during quite a bit of it. Great job.
Review By [emeraldisle] • Date [21 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from TurquoiseGirl
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Great story. I enjoyed Harry's and Daphne's banter.
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Genericrandom
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I loved it. The dry wit, the sarcastic humor, it was light on the puns, but I think I lost a toe or two to the biting dry wit. Even if I can't concretely argue about the characters, I think this certainly fits the personality types of the characters much more than JKR's 'epilogue'. Ginny and Harry blowing up? Yup. Ron getting enveloped in the pace that Hermione set herself in order to 'fix' the world? Sure. Harry, refusing to reach out for help and thus self destructing alone? Yeah, in fact hell yeah. Draco growing up? Marriage tends to send you towards one of two extremes if you haven't already fixed your personality in stone, Total Child or Finally Maturing Adult.

I do have to say, I totally saw Astoria changing the invite. I can't recall (since I started reading this over at TFF and didn't pick it back up from the beginning) if that was hinted at earlier on, or if you even said it'd happen, but after all of the schem--sorry, plotting she'd already done, it was easy to see coming. Didn't make it any less funny though.

This was a great story and whether it's another installment in this continuity, a story with a similar setup, or just you writing sarcasticass!Harry again I look forward to what comes next.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [15 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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