Review of chapter "1. Red eyes" from
ShieldageReview:
"swore that she would become her mother," needs a 'never' or a 'not'
" where calling out for a rest." is a 'were'
Chapter 2 - scraped, not scrapped
Good use of the skinwalker. I like how you described Faith's sandblasting technique. The thunder bird is interesting.
Kakistos lost to Kendra? Cool, no wonder he's pissed at Faith :)
Review By [
Shieldage] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The morning after" from
JoshuaRichardsonReview:
Too bad, it was an interesting story, had lots of potential. Oh, well.
Review By [
JoshuaRichardson] • Date [25 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The morning after" from
McspenderReview:
Wow, I love when an author uses native american myths, specially one like this =).
Thank you for such a cool fic =).
See ya!!!.
Review By [
Mcspender] • Date [25 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
