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The Thunder Bird

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Review of chapter "1. Red eyes" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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"swore that she would become her mother," needs a 'never' or a 'not'
" where calling out for a rest." is a 'were'

Chapter 2 - scraped, not scrapped

Good use of the skinwalker. I like how you described Faith's sandblasting technique. The thunder bird is interesting.

Kakistos lost to Kendra? Cool, no wonder he's pissed at Faith :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The morning after" from JoshuaRichardson
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Too bad, it was an interesting story, had lots of potential. Oh, well.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [25 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The morning after" from Mcspender
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Wow, I love when an author uses native american myths, specially one like this =).
Thank you for such a cool fic =).

See ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [25 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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