I love this story!!! I can't wait until the next chapter. I hope that you will continue this story as it is a wonderful new take on the X-men Xander fiction. My only question is about Spike. He will be coming back right? Because if I am following your timeline right he should almost be back from being a ghost right? Just wondering.v
Review By [SirenNightMoon] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Are you going to include the "Spike comes back as a ghost until Fred gets him a body" thing? Cuz Spike = win, and Spike/Xander = amazing. Anyways, great story, great chapter, can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
Give me a while ne? I'm currently planning up a storm for Child of the Hellmouth. However we will be seeing Spike, just gotta get everyone in place first. Glad you're enjoying the fic though.
Review By [Ryutana] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Not Rated
This is getting good. I'm so happy you updated! Oh I would love to see Kurt's face when Dawn and Xander threaten him with the shovel speech! Cuz established or not they need to!
Comments from author:
I'm keeping the shovel speech in mind, Todd needs people to be protective of him. *nods* Glad you're liking it. And I hope I can keep it up. lol
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Not Rated
I love this newest chapter - Dawn is wonderful and Kurt and Todd are so cute. I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to Xander and Dawn as they get to know them more.
Review By [valdemarherald] • Date [3 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Good story. Caught one little error; when Todd is talking about the difference between Magneto's and Xavier's views he says "how mutants should live next to mutants." I think you meant "how mutants should live next to humans."
Comments from author:
You're kidding! *goes to look* Well crap. Thanks for catching that. >>; I'll fix it when I fix the translations. Eheh. *hides*
Review By [Currchan] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Lovely update (if a long time coming :P). So will she threaten Kurt? Will Xander? Please continue soon
Comments from author:
^^; Yeah, there was a mix up with my beta, she thought she sent the chapter back to me a couple of weeks ago and I was all 'uh, no' and she was like 'oops XD'.
But glad you liked, and I will definitely keep the threats in mind.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]