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Review of chapter "7" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
Review:
Damn. That was one fine read. Wish you had more where that came from.
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from valdimarian
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As much as most of my mind is screaming "Oh thank god it ended that way" a tiny sliver of my brain is going "What if Faith HAD gone with the guy that Angelus would have considered evil?" and wants you to write it.

(Of course Angelus was a pansy, the ONLY good mindgame he pulled was killing Jenny, everything else he did was worse than Spike's plans... 'Cause Spike had good plans, he was just too impatient to pull them off.)
Comments from author:
Lol I kind of wonder how it would have gone too...but I'll let someone else write it. Pretty much done with Lecter
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done an excellent job with this story and I hope you will get inspired to write a sequel to this story as well.


::Gives the plot bunny a serving of Mohnnudel::

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I am certain there is too much certainty in the world.
- Michael Crichton
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Comments from author:
Sorry don't think I will. But thanks :)
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from Arekanderu
Review:
Amazing story! I enjoyed it immensely. You have an amazing insight into very difficult characters!
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from AllenPitt
Review:
Poor HL--if only he'd found Faith a little earlier, he'd have had the perfect weapon. Imagine if he'd ever gotten hold of that crazy vamp from Buffy S3 (cruciamentum ep)...
Comments from author:
I don't pity him lol
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from leelaa
Review:
The first six chapters were damn good, but the final chapter was...superb. Kudos.
Comments from author:
thank you, glad you enjoyed
Review By [leelaa] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Wow, never thought I'd worry about-- *for* Lecter.
Comments from author:
lol first time for everything, he doesn't know what he's done
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from FireWolfe
Review:
This was your best work yet. It really had both characters down to a T. Faith has found her inner power. Not that of a slayer but the person she could be. Well done.
Comments from author:
thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed and also that she did find her power as you said
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
I'm so....excited. As someone who was labeled with 'severe sociopathic tendencies' at age eleven, I can honestly say that this really captures how our minds really work. I've never killed anyone and hopefully won't, too messy you see, but I'm drawn to people not because of beauty or power, but only if they are interesting to me. Whoa, that is the most honest I've been in a review since, well, ever.
Comments from author:
Wow...well thanks for sharing, that's very interesting to me. I hope you enjoy the conclusion.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, so he wants to help her and be her pal! Everything is ok! Whew, I bet she feels silly, having been worried over nothing.
It's going to take at least 2 visits by Angel to fix this, is all I'm saying... (and boy, would Lecter love to have old Angel on the couch...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6" from Cutiepie
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It is amazing how much more you can make me hate Lecter after each chapter! But I can't help thinking about just how much stronger Faith can become after surviving this episode in her life. To actually face off with a real psychotic like him (and despite his assertion that he is just sociopathic, he IS psychotic as well) and to survive (mostly) intact would be incredible. How damaged is she really going to end up, I wonder.
Comments from author:
I hope you enjoy the conclusion then :)
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from Gideon
Review:
Its amazing how much action you can pack into a chapter with no action at all. I feel Faith's pain as Dr Lecter peels away defenses she didn't even know she had. The fact that she knows something he doesn't (about the supernatural) is probably the only thing keeping her from loosing it completely. It is the one thing that makes all his assessments just a little off, and means he can't really understand her interactions with Buffy or Angel.
Comments from author:
That and the amount of control and self respect she has worked so hard to build for herself up to this point. I hope you continue to enjoy.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Gideon
Review:
What does he want now? At least Faith has her own reason for listening now, she could try to take him down. I hope she is patient enough to think of a better way than just beating him up.
Comments from author:
You'll see. Lol
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Chills. I have chills. That is perfect characterization. Your view on Faith, why she reacts the way she does, what she fears, who she really is at her core, is so perfect that the next time I write her I'm going to be using this story to keep a handle on her and know how she'll react. It's very much like my own psychological profile of her, only far more accurate and much more detailed. It really is the details that matter, isn't it?
Comments from author:
Wow that's very complimentary. I would love to read your psychological profile of her if you have it written out. I always do try to incorporate detail into my writing so I can "see" the scene played out like a movie in my mind. If I can't see the facial expressions and the small movements of the characters as well as the larger motions I can't write.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from Arekanderu
Review:
Dexter is a show about a serial killer who only targets other killers. It's a rather fascinating show that is very well written. I think you might like it :) Try it http://www.watchingmoviesathome.org/watch-4289-Dexter
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Not Rated
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