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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Beautiful moment between father and daughter, and I like how you had Faith work through her issue with guns.
Comments from author:
Deleted scenes, you know you like 'em! When I started writing this crossover (actually, the first time I crossed the Slayers with the Winchesters) I kept coming back to the gun issue in my head. Buffy, of course, in cannon is very anti-gun, understandably. I see Faith as being much more practical, but when she was shot, the idea struck me that she might be a bit "gun-shy" (yes, that was a horrible pun, I know!). Still, I saw it as a perfect opportunity for some father daughter bonding Morrow/Lehane style!
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [12 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tals
This was lovely. A great missing scene for the story, and a good insight into Faith's character...

Review By [tals] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from shinysolace
Nice little look into the every day stuff... father daughter bonding SAMCRO style.

Also, just finished the AC- really good!!!
Nice conclusion- Faith's refusal that she passed out and that everyone else were wrong- and finally the showdown with Buffy and the gang... Thought Xander standing up for himself/apart a little by making it clear he didn't rat was spot on, as was Giles not being steamrolled over by Buffy; so it wasn;t explosive in the sense of drama and kidnapping, but it seemed just enough that Dawn stood up for herself and obviously the club had her back. Not sure if I'd been as charitable with letting B back in, but I guess the whole giving birth and hormones will do that to ya.
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lilyofthevalley
This was such a good side piece! Loved the father daughter moments!

Side note: noticed this story is sitting in the wrong catagory.

Thanks again for the fabulous stories!
Comments from author:
Thanks much and I fixed the category thing, I thought I put it in but I'm betting I completely overlooked it when I posted. My bad, sorry mods!
Review By [lilyofthevalley] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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