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Review of chapter "Xander Squarepants?" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cool. Short :)

--The kin tight uniform suited her; especially with the long elegant gloves she was wearing. In her hand she held a jet-black wig with a white streak down the middle.
Should be skin-tight. I assume it's either Rogue or Bride of Frankenstein? :D

--Xander completely confused her though “I don’t get it Xander, why are you wearing square pants. Xander just smirked as he put a tape in her stereo…

Should be something more like:

Xander completely confused her, though. "I don’t get it, Xander. Why are you wearing square pants?"

Xander just smirked as he put a tape in her stereo…
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander Squarepants?" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
OK, so I got Xander's costume without a problem. However, I can't quite figure out what you had Willow dress as. Any more hints?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Dec 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander Squarepants?" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Darn it! You stopped just as you got to the action. Please tell us what happened on your Halloween to your Scoobies. Pretty please, with pumkin pie on top? Nice characterization of Xander and Cordie. If Cordie was in Ethan's shop, what costume did she buy? Something super hot I hope. (pant, pant. drool)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [2 Dec 03] • Not Rated
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