Just found this series and I am really enjoying it. The titles for the COG heads cracked me up. You really captured the voices of the NCIS characters perfectly. I also really like how you wrote Xander and Willow - it was them, only grown-up. Hope there will be more.
Comments from author:
There will indeed be more, I have ideas for several more short fics to fit into this world. But it may not happen as regularly once Fic A Day is over, as I will be turning my attention to my longer WIPs which I haven't touched at all this month.
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Ziva could put a serious hurt on Xander without killing him, as a message. I'm not sure she would survive the consequences, however. A bunch of angry Slayers and a super powerful po'd witch. Not pretty.
Comments from author:
Ziva hurting Xander would definitely have repercussions, but against an unaugmented human (ie, non-Slayer), Xander should be able hold his own.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Oh dear. Ziva's in for a hell of a wake-up call with the new COG instead of the Council. And if she actually does succeed in doing something to Xander there are going to be a lot of very angry Slayers after her. I definitely want to see more of this verse, and I hope you do decide to write more soon; this counts as a pseudo-cliffhanger.
Also, Buffy as "Slayer Comma The" was pretty awesome. COG's Grownup In Chief is not too bad, either. :D
Comments from author:
Yes, Ziva will eventually learn the error of her ways. There will be more, but with Fic A Day drawing to a close, it may not happen immediately, as I'm itching to get back to some of my longer WIPs and start the new one that's taken over my brain. (NCIS, but not going to fit in with this series.)
I'm glad you like the titles. Hopefully at some point I can work in a mention of Faith and Andrew's titles as well.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Uh-oh, Xander is in some serious trouble if he ever runs into Ziva. Maybe he can flash his abs and distract her. Great story.
Comments from author:
You think Ziva is that easy to distract? Besides, I'm pretty sure Xander can put up a respectable show against Ziva. Mossad trained or not, she's still only human, and he's been hanging with Slayers for upwards of a decade.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Why is his a one shot? That is just cruel to your readers I want more! I love this story and I would love to read more of this.
Comments from author:
It's a one shot because while I may come up with scattered scenes that fit into this series, I don't have any overarching plot that would make for a good multichapter. Fear not, I will continue to add to the series whenever the spirit moves me, and I'm definitely not done with Ziva's mistrust of the Watchers.
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
