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Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from Harry
Review:
*Gulps* When Ziva says something like that, someone is going to be in for a LONG stay in the hospital! A VERY long stay!
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from ShyBob
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Nice added backstory. Slick dovetailing of BtVS and NCIS canon.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from Alkeni
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Another good read.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from bucksavage
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People just don't learn, do they? Don''t piss Ziva off! Excellent fic!
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from Kateydidnt
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Ok, you do realize you have to write the encounter between Ziva and a Watcher.
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from Elleria
Review:
This is good.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from serenityselena
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interesting conversation :D
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from BerserkerNW
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Alright! You've already answered most of my questions! ^_^

So is Ziva unaware that the Council is under new management? Great story!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from spygrrl
Review:
Just found this series and I am really enjoying it. The titles for the COG heads cracked me up. You really captured the voices of the NCIS characters perfectly. I also really like how you wrote Xander and Willow - it was them, only grown-up. Hope there will be more.
Comments from author:
There will indeed be more, I have ideas for several more short fics to fit into this world. But it may not happen as regularly once Fic A Day is over, as I will be turning my attention to my longer WIPs which I haven't touched at all this month.
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from ChiVayne
Review:
Ziva could put a serious hurt on Xander without killing him, as a message. I'm not sure she would survive the consequences, however. A bunch of angry Slayers and a super powerful po'd witch. Not pretty.
Comments from author:
Ziva hurting Xander would definitely have repercussions, but against an unaugmented human (ie, non-Slayer), Xander should be able hold his own.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from SlowMercury
Review:
Oh dear. Ziva's in for a hell of a wake-up call with the new COG instead of the Council. And if she actually does succeed in doing something to Xander there are going to be a lot of very angry Slayers after her. I definitely want to see more of this verse, and I hope you do decide to write more soon; this counts as a pseudo-cliffhanger.

Also, Buffy as "Slayer Comma The" was pretty awesome. COG's Grownup In Chief is not too bad, either. :D
Comments from author:
Yes, Ziva will eventually learn the error of her ways. There will be more, but with Fic A Day drawing to a close, it may not happen immediately, as I'm itching to get back to some of my longer WIPs and start the new one that's taken over my brain. (NCIS, but not going to fit in with this series.)

I'm glad you like the titles. Hopefully at some point I can work in a mention of Faith and Andrew's titles as well.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from zigpal
Review:
Uh-oh, Xander is in some serious trouble if he ever runs into Ziva. Maybe he can flash his abs and distract her. Great story.
Comments from author:
You think Ziva is that easy to distract? Besides, I'm pretty sure Xander can put up a respectable show against Ziva. Mossad trained or not, she's still only human, and he's been hanging with Slayers for upwards of a decade.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from Bobboky
Review:
nice job
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from twlight
Review:
Why is his a one shot? That is just cruel to your readers I want more! I love this story and I would love to read more of this.
Comments from author:
It's a one shot because while I may come up with scattered scenes that fit into this series, I don't have any overarching plot that would make for a good multichapter. Fear not, I will continue to add to the series whenever the spirit moves me, and I'm definitely not done with Ziva's mistrust of the Watchers.
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unforgiven" from DarthPayne
Review:
Ooh, is Ziva going to be Xanders new girlfriend?

She seems to fit the pattern.
Comments from author:
You know, I hadn't thought about it, but that might actually work...
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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