Review of chapter "Masks" from Millaros
Coldness and calculation,
Slayer's path of destruction,
I can't write a poem even if my life depends on it. So I'm just going to start there before I bring even bigger embarrassment and humiliation to myself. Anyways, just wanted to say that this is a BRILLIANT plot and your should DEFINITELY continue writing it.
Review By [Millaros
] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Selfish Sacrifice" from MissE
Very interesting set of story seeds so far. Looking forward to more.
Review By [MissE
] • Date [19 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And a Step to the Left" from SAK
Please continue this particular story.
However the part that reads "Several hours later a hand reached up through the still open portal." shouldn't that be several "minutes" later other wise 35 years will have passed rescuing the slaves?
Please update again soon.
Comments from author:
I actually had to think about that for a bit and finally came up with an answer.
The portal, while open, connects the two dimensions together, making it seem as though time is passing along at the same speed. So Buffy jumps through the portal, gets knocked out, the portal remains open, and several hours later she frees the slaves and they craw back through to LA. But then the portal closes and the dimensions no longer have that connection, leaving them to flow at their own time rates.
Heh...it made sense to me in my mind, so I hope it does for you as well.
Review By [SAK
] • Date [31 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And a Step to the Left" from Demona
Interesting concept. Makes you wonder why her aging process has been slowed down so drastically.
Review By [Demona
] • Date [28 Aug 10] • Not Rated